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  • Kismet

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    This chapter made me 'awww' out loud - it was fantastic. And she fell asleep at Zacky's! That was just so damn cute. Haha.
    October 24th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • Smile! Its trouble:D

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    wow uhh -speechlessness goes here- lol
    wow O.O Zacky's gonna get his ass kicked bhahahaha but thats sweet of him i think they will probably get together though but yeah More soon, yeah!?!?
    October 24th, 2009 at 06:50am
  • james owen sullivan.

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    Awe thas was so nice of zacky it say it's his baby. And he's taking her to the doctors.
    But can't doctors tell if someones been raped due to like..tearing?
    October 24th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • a venom

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    loved the update
    October 23rd, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    loved it
    October 23rd, 2009 at 08:40pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww i bet Zacky hasloved Liked her for like ever! i mean he even gave her her fave drink!
    I can wait to see Brians reaction!
    October 23rd, 2009 at 06:16pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    awww! that was sooooo cute! i wuv zacky and all his cute-ness! more soon!
    October 23rd, 2009 at 03:58pm
  • atrocious

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    Ahh! Yes! Loved it :D
    October 23rd, 2009 at 01:53pm
  • Becka Vengeance

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    Aww, I knew Zacky wasn't a complete asshole =] I think Brian is gonna find out that she was raped though. Awsome chapter =]
    October 23rd, 2009 at 10:24am
  • secrets-that-die

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    wonder what's she going to say
    October 22nd, 2009 at 05:26am
  • sTeLLaRxFRESH

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    I don't think she should take the deal.
    I mean it's sweet of Zacky but that only leads to more lies nad lies are never good.
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:17pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    moreeeeeeee! i loved it!
    October 21st, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • Vengeance Luvr

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    She's sooo gunna take it. I loved it so much. More soon, I can't wait, its so addicting!! :D
    October 21st, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • a venom

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    this is getting good can't wait for more
    October 21st, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    oh wow this story is really good!!
    *subscribes*
    aww zacky! I loves zacky! he so likes her! you can soooo tell! hehe
    October 21st, 2009 at 06:50pm
  • Kismet

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    Holy shit. I knew it - I knew she was gonna be preggers! GAH! Ugh. Poor, Harley. This is some messed up shit, man. And that's extremely sweet that Zacky'll pretend it's his for her sake - really sweet. I hope Brian won't kick his ass too bad, though. And Zack's mood swings - though seemingly necessary - are pissing me off. Haha. Updates? :)
    October 21st, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • deathbatchick6661

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    yaya for zacky!! hes such a sweetie:) zacky COMPLETELY surprised me........lol :D
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    I think she is gonna take it, 'cause if not them we really wouldn't have a story.

    Why is Zack doing it? Hmmm?

    8)
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:53pm
  • Smile! Its trouble:D

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    Omg Zacky is so sweet I didn't see that coming =/
    Thats nice I think that she probably will take the deal but she will regret it =) can't wait for more
    =^-^=
    October 21st, 2009 at 01:31pm
  • atrocious

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    ahh! I got to know if she's pregnant!
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:36am
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