The Missing O - Comments

this is incredible. its so cute and amazing and has such a well written plot and just. I have so much love for this story. I love the diversity in the characters and hoe Morgan really starts to develop and in some way becomes more self aware of things I guess.. if that makes sense? idk. I've never read a story like this on here and it truly is amazing. I love it. I can't wait for the sequel to come out. I'm sure I'll thoroughly enjoy it as I did with this one (:

I just read this and it's simply amazing. Can't wait for the sequel.

Read the whole story after it was finished. Definitely excited for the sequel.

Soo soo soo sad its over, but nonetheless i loved the ending and everything in between :)

i absolutely loved this story <3

wow, this was amazing. that's all i can say. i postponed my cigarettes just to finish reading this. and i know that doesn't sound like much, but i've never done that for a story when the opportunity to chain smoke came up. omg, i'm completely speechless. i adored this in every single way! <333

this is really great! i only got to chapter 4 so far, but i'm really excited to read the rest! :) you're such a talented writer! <33 :)

Well, i spent the majority of my Saturday reading this, and a good portion of my sunday. All I can is, time well spent. This story was awesome. I really loved Morgan. and her and Oli's relationship. You made a very unreal situation, seem very very real. You're right, not the best ending ever, but it sufficed. I wish there was more to read!

I know this story is finished and everything, but I have to say its one of the best ones I've ever read. It was original and the writing style was completely unique. I love the cross between the story she was writing and how it was a reflection of her life. I know it sounds goofy and everything but I laughed out loud and the hilarious parts and felt all kinds of emotions. I loved this story. Thanks so much for an amazing read.

wow wow wow wow wow
i read this alll in two days, it was the best fanfic i read <3
you are an amazing writer.

I love this story a lot<3
I found a picture that reminds me of this story--well, reminds me of Morgan, that is(:
http://www.polyvore.com/youre_so_lovely_are_you/thing?id=18378048

chapter 6:

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“Me and Morgan are old associates,” he said cockily, and I felt the leather shift under my legs as he closed those few inches I’d been sure to maintain between us. “We go way back.”
“Really?” Charlie was genuinely surprised, giving me a sharp look. “Well…she never mentions you.”
“Oh, burn!” Curtis wailed. I fought back a smirk when Oliver scratched the back of his neck awkwardly, looking into his lap.

I have nothing else to say. i think that. completes it for that chapter. just let it be. beautiful :D

Chapter 5: WOO. night out! oww oww! there finally gunna let there hair down and have fun, cause they havent in a really long time. ANDDD, i thought it was going to be the same old. Go have fun, thts it. I was not expecting a suprise at the end of this

When she hears the voice. that shes know that shes heard before. ITS SO FAMILIAR. and its oliver xD i love how he stomach does twists and turns and flips whenever he talks to her, i think its really really adorable.

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I sat myself on one of the bar stools, blowing some of my fringe from my eyes, only just then realizing how hot it was in this place. Looking around, I wasn’t all that impressed with the interior of the place. You could see whoever had designed it had worked hard to make it look shabby but modern, with couches and armchairs dotted about the place instead of tables and chairs, and exposed beams all over the place. I’d seen it a million times in a million clubs all over Sheffield.

“Four pints o’ Stella and eight shots o’ Vodka please, mate.”

I frowned. That voice. Where in the world had I heard that voice before?

I felt an arm slink across my back, and smelled beer before I looked up and saw his face.

“Hello there, Morgan,” Oliver grinned sloppily down at me. “Fancy a drink?”

Chapter four: i love how you introduce britt
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The only normal perosn that works in the office with her,

He sounds like a pretty down to earth kind of dude. OMG THE CDS!!! as soon as he said that i knew that something was going to happen. I was sortof hoping to see her reaction.. like what she would say when she found out that oli was famous. And she dosent even really know him.. just.. sees him. so i guess she wouldnt have been that suprised but i will never know D; and now, thats pretty much going to haunt me forever... x___x err bllaaahh.

katie seems fucking adorable <3

chapter three:

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CREEPER BOSS> that really really! creeped me out big time. I cant belive it. and she has to deal with him on a regular basis, which is horrible. And i really feel for her. I bet she must have felt horrible when she went in and asked for a raise. he was acting all creepy. I WAS TERRIFIED TO BE HONEST.

I thought he was going to sexually harasss her, it would have really made me cry and freaaked out, if i was her i knew i wouldnt be able to do that..

chapter two: Charlotte.
The roomate. she seems like a pretty cool person. And morgan knowing charlotte for her whole life almost is amazing; they are apparently really close.

When she was crying.. i thought someone died i was scared so bad. Aww she has a baby <3

i really didnt know why she was crying just because she lost her job, but then after thinking it over for a couple of minutes i got why she was so sadded by the news of her being fired. Because some people, peticularly young people who are living on there own, are usually on thin ice. MONEY WISE. they need all the money they can get because they are making just ENOUGH money to make rent, bills and food on the table. and its even harder because she has a baby! I was so scared for charlie. i was so sadd. i was terrified at the thought that they wouldnt make it..

chapter one: I LOVE THE SIMPLICITY OF THE FIRST CHAPTER.

"your a funny kid" Ohlord. i think i say that Alottt. like alot alot.

I Love how she uses a type writer it is sort of old fashion but thats what makes her different and what makes her feel different from everyone else too! Andd how she refuses to tell oliver whats shes writing no matter how many times he asks her and trys to bother her. She always mentions him as an annoyance, but she really cant be bothered with whatever he does. she is bothered in a sense, but not enough to make her acutually say something harmful to him. AHAHAHA BLOODY BASTARD <3 x]

"for someone whose got so many words in there head, you dont speak alot" That line sort of made him sound like a smart ass. ahah.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEE your fucking short storys. there like.. a little piece of heaven its so miraculous. I WANTED IT TO FINISH and be able to read more so badd!

I love this story! It was really unique and I fell in love with every part of it. I can't wait for the sequel.

That story was absolutely amazing. :) I love it. I can only hope the sequel comes soon :)

Beautiful ending. Can't wait for the sequel!