The Missing O - Comments

holy shit!! that was fucking amazing!! :]
updatee soon please.
I'll be waitng. >:]

YES, the events make up for it! Yay. :)

!wwww! I was waiting for Morgan and Oli to get together. I love this story! It shows a side of Oli that no one expects but in reality could really be him. I love your writing style. And the story within the story is a brilliant idea. I found it tedious at first because I really wanted to know what was going on in the actualy story but now it's just an extra detail that makes the story. Love it!

I can't say I'm not dissapointed at how close you seem to think this story is coming to the end of itself, but I'm sure you as the writer know what's best for it. I hope maybe in the future, you could do a sequel or something, as I have really come to grow close to the characters.

I really haven't much to say about this chapter. It was brilliant, as per usual. The scene with Oli and Morgan gave me a funny feeling in the pit of my stomach. And the kid and Marlow scene was exciting, and extremely well written - it's almost as if those parts of the story are extracts from an actual published book.

Oh my. :)

Not completely. “At least not all the time. Oliver, I’m not like Charlie. I don’t need constant attention and presents and fancy meals out to remind me of what I want. I think, maybe, I’d be able to deal with it.”
-OoOoOoOoO yay glad this is finally out

oh jeez. you've left me on the edge of my seat!
this story is beautiful.

Serisouly, that update was the highlight of my day. Even better than that cute boy talking to me in Math.

WOMAN. I hate you for being MIA for so long.
Just kidding, how can I hate you when you produce such beautiful writing!
Ah. Anyway.
Now that my drug dose has been filled... for the moment, I can't wait for another update!
And. Morgan's in Oli's room. ;)

P.S. How longish is the series going to be?!

I'm excited about this update! :) It was amazing.

lovelovelove! Nyona, you are fantastic. I'm so glad you've updated :D xxx

Amazing update!
Mooore soon please!!

yay! an update! i loved the fact that oli got all embarrassed when carol and ian came in.
update soon aye?

im so happy this was updated! gosh you've left it at a cliff hanger! silly oliver not telling her what he does in life and having to find out from some other guy and his brother! but still, he had his reasons, perhaps he didnt tell her because he likes her hmmm! interesting c: i can't wait to the next update seriously, its been so long! update agaiin soon i really want to know what happens next!! :DD

wowowowow! I've waited very long for this and i'mm pleased. this was great! :D
can't wait for more!!

I'll be waiting >:]

I love this story
update soon :]

I love this story!!!! I'm very excited to see what happens and the next chapters update!!! <3

Ahh update! I can't wait to find out what he says! [:

Yay, you updated! =)
The new chapter is awesome, it was so enjoyable to read.
I really love the style you write in, it's interesting and very well written!
I can't wait to find out what Oliver has to say to Morgan in the next chapter =D

Hope you update again soon, I can't get enough of this story ;P
xxxx

I hadn’t been sure what she’d been more excited for when I’d made her a cup of tea at five a.m. before she had to leave: the return of Matt, or the prospect of her new Chanel coat. I thought it could have been both.
-attn attn charlie doesn't deserve that nice of a friend and psh girl.

It made me wonder how he’d pulled this off. Either I was incredibly dim and couldn’t see further than the end of my nose, or Oliver was incredibly cunning. Maybe a little of both.
-I also do not understand.

If only I had, then I wouldn’t have had to scrape the change from the pit of my hollow wallet and get a taxi to the outskirts of Sheffield, to Oliver’s parents house.
-oh that's awkward

“He stays here a lot, but he has his own place. Same building as me and the rest of the…”
“The rest of the band.” He nodded when I’d completed his sentence. There was a long pause, where we did nothing but watch one another. Laughter, from two people in the other rooms, threaded through the walls and under the gaps below the doors to meet us, but it never broke the stillness.
-aaaaaaawkwarrdddd

“Never mind. You’re a true Pratt, son. Morgan, has he offered you a drink? Have you eaten? We’ve just had our tea, but I’m sure one of us can cook you something up. Carole, have we got any of the Spaghetti left in the fridge? Morgan, you’re not a veggie like Oli is, are you? Right fussy eater he is!”
-awh. so welcoming.

I was so pumped that this is updated. :)