I loved it :) The layout was great and I really think it complemted the story. The only advie I can offer you is to add some spaces between your paragraphs because it would make it easer to read. Other then that it was just great. I loved it and I think it is a great story for Jacob and Nessie. It was exactly what I pictured in my mind when I read twilight.
July 11th, 2011 at 02:58am