I have no words. You are one of the best writers I've seen so far, honestly, and I hope when you update next you don't wait too long. This story is so captivating, I must read more....
This was a very looooooong chapter! & I loved every piece of it!!! I'm so glad you updated this! It took me a while to catch up with it, but I'm so glad to do it!!! Your writing is fantastic & I can't wait for another update!!!
was so happy to see see an update email for silence in my inbox today. I have truly missed this story and am looking forward to more of it. I probably said this before but it deserves to be said again, your writing is amazing. I able to see the care and detail you put into each chapter even if it is just a filler. as the reader i able to picture myself in rora world and really get into the story. excellent job on chapter 20, can't believe riza prego and the three of them just need to be friends again haha. Also johnny so cute wanting to be her help her out x). Hope to see the update soon:)
I cannot begin to tell you how much I freakin' love this story! I absolutely adore it! I love the long chapters! I love the plot (Although I still have no idea what the hell is gonna happen, which is exciting)! I love the characters! I love all the details you put into it! & most of all... I love the way you write! You're an amazing writer & I hope you update soon!!! Great work!!!
I was so happy when I saw the comment that you updated. I think I did a happy dance? xD
I laughed when that dude got kicked in the balls. I laughed hard. My cousin, who was reading behind me, was all, 'I can feel his pain!' So yeah... I hope you update soon!
The summary is very good- like the beginning narrative of a movie. That, as well as the first chapter, seems to match the setting depicted in the banner, really well. I’m rather confused as to why this is set in Huntington Beach, however. That place doesn’t look like it ever gets any sunlight. The grammar is good, descriptive. I like Chance’s personality, but Rora seems rather dreary. The ending of chapter one is a pretty good cliff-hanger.
woooah. This is a really amazing story. It has such a good plot and is really, really interesting. I'm really intrigued, guess I'll have to keep reading to find out what happens! :D It's very well written too, you have an amazing talent, keep up with the good work! I love it hahaha :)
OK so my brain is in a worl Chapter 7 is a complete mind fuck i got to tell you so much is going on at the same time i can't wait to find out what happens next you story is the best story i have read in years and its only a fanfic holy shit well its EPIC can't wait
STUPID FUCKEN BITCH i already hate the cook and that is just assuming its the new cook but green eyes girl fits the description Chance gave she needs to be taken care of i don't like her
OK so i got a theory going on and bouncing in my brain i think that Rora is the vortex but its just a theory i mean they think its a virus have they ever thought that maybe its a person *grins* so this chapter rocked you rock thank you for taking time out of your day to keep my bored ass entertained :D