Bet Your Life I'd Do It Again - Comments

I absolutely adored this. It flowed so perfectly together. The three of you have some chemistry together and not just with the boys. It actually played out like a movie in my head, and that is something I love when I read a story. And though I'm very late replying to this I must say I would love seeing more of this if you guys were willing to write it. This is how co-writes should be....classic. <33

I agree with Synfully Insane, I would be mightily panicked, not to mention a bit disappointed, that Zacky didn't change me into my pajamas. Actually, I would be those things if I woke up and found that he'd taken my clothes off only to replace them with more.

I loved how well this worked with three authors. Your writing flows together so well that it was seamless. Very funny and sweet. I kind of hate for it to end.

Amazing last chapter! :) Awesome! Grea job girls!

Well done. That kept me quiet for a while... and amused.. and happy.. and smiley.. I loved the way it flowed considering it was written jointly.

Do you think you'd consider turning this into a story when they all get back home ?

pretty please xx

It's over already?!
-pouts-
I really liked this one, chicas.
See? Right there? I used a Spanish word! Soooo, technically, I studied for my Spanish test tomorrow! XD Yeah, no, not really, but I can pretend for now.

Back on topic,
Ooooh, I was surprised at the guys. -insert face even though they don't work-
None of them tried to get in any of the girls' pants! In the sexual sense, of course. I can't imagine any of the guys---well, Jim's and exception--trying to squeeze themselves into girl pants. Somehow I can just picture Shads or Brian going around complaining about his junk being squished...
I'm straying again. Sorry. XD

Ahh, well, hopefully you guys get that I loved it. I'll definitely be subscribed to another joint of yours if you choose to do one. :D

Very nicely done, ladies!
This story was amazing, and I absolutely loved it.
It made me laugh, and it made me smile and go "Aww!", like, a billion gazillion times.
I just wonder how long Rhian and Andrea went back and forth, deciding who would get to be with Brian!
Brilliant story, dears. You all collaborated very nicely. =}

This was a really good story! I was so surprised that there was no sex, I actually laughed at myself! The story was very well written and the plot was different than usual. Very interesting to say in the least. I enjoyed it from beginning to end and sheepishly admit that a sequel wouldn't be bad... ^.^

I loved that you guys were able to develop the characters of the three girls in only three chapters! Very admirable and enjoyable! Most of all I liked the fact that in the beginning they pissed Shadows and Gates off. But Jimmy was the one to accept them! Gotta love the guy! In reality we all know that he's the best... XD

Absolutely adrored this!
You guys should do a sequel or something,
it was beutiful!
Wish it was longer! x

does that mean there's no more?! Its awsome!!!! If it isnt cant wait for the next if it is then :'(

I loved it!
I hope you update soon!

.... I'll give you a cupcake! :-D

I absolutely adored this story! I wish it was longer, but this ending really was good so I'm okay : )
Great job ladies!

awesome ending!
loved this story girls!

Adorable ending! I think it's hilarious that they were all couples and then Jimmy and Johnny. I wonder if people around them thought that the two of them were together too. =P (I'll come save you, Jimmy!) It's so cute that all three guys want to see them again. Then again, it would be majorly unfair otherwise, haha. :P What a perfect ending to their vacation. And now they have something to look forward to when they get home! This was a really cute story. :)

thats it!!!! =D
there needs to be more
way more!!!!! Please
i loved it though
very well done
<3 Michele

I'm whoring this story when I update Never Will I Forget You, tonight. I love it.

So, I shall. :D

OMG, this is page two. I so own! :)

Long comment? Comin' right up! :)

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couldn't quite explain the sudden attack of butterflies

Stupid, you're in looovvee! <333

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Smoothing down a lock of red hair that insisted on curling slightly,

I'm sure you look more than fine, hun.

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"You want to head down to the lobby?"

He means his room; he's just confused because a beautiful woman is standing in front of him.

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"Matt's just gone to see if Amber's done, and I do believe Brian was the first one ready and knocking on Rhian's door a while back"

Awweeee, such gentlermen!
Wow, they changed from assholes to great men.

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"He's strangely keen for a guy that last night couldn't wait to see the back of the three of us"

Sweetie, he's bipolar.

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"There's just no telling what goes on in the mind of Gates at times"

Yupup! I oh so agree.

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"Asshole!" Jimmy cried.

Awwe, how rude, Jimmeh!
Say, sorry!

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Rhian wasn't quite sure what to make of the sudden change in Brian.

He wants you.
He wants all of you.
He just wants you in bed. Just go along with it, woman!
And enjoy you're vacation with Synyster Gates. :D

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"So, what's the plan for the rest of the evening?"

Brian: Well, me and Rhian are gonna go back into my room and have sex, what about you, Matt?
Matt: I'm gonna head up to bed...with Amber. Zack?
Zacky: -creepy look upon face- Wild monkey sex.
Amber: -eys wide-
Zacky: -gives her a perverted look-
Jimmy: Well, I guess me and Johnny are just gonna leave, then. -eys Johnny-
Johnny: Umm...Jim, I'd rather not do that.
Jimmy: What? Play video games?
Johnny: O_O
The End.

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"I'm not up for a club Rev, just a nice quiet bar would suit me fine"

Sure, Brian, stop lying. He means his bed, Jim!

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"Alright then, let's settle the bill and get out of here

and go have hot sex with each other." Matt stated, digging in his pocket for his wallet.

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"So who's paying for me?" Johnny asked.

Awee, Johnny wants some lovin', too. :(

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"As much as I love you Seward, I'm not trying to get in your pants, so you can pay for yourself"

Really, Jimmy? Really?
You should re-think that bit.

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Amber and Rhian looked at each other, hoping he was wrong.

Perverts.

Bahha, as I state that and I'M the one wanting all the sex. XD

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"Absinthe, tequila or sambuca?"

Andie: All three; I wanna be so drunk that I loose it and fuck you like a maniac.
Zacky: O_O -smiles, widely. Pours more than the three and hand it over-
Andie: Shank you, Baker.

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"Think maybe we should help ZV get Andie back to the hotel?"

If the hotel is Zacky's room, then sure. Go right ahead.

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"Maybe so, but I was hoping that if we took her back, then you and I could get some alone time"

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OMG, sex.

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"You can't be telling me Synyster Gates wants to just snuggle and talk"

Honey, it's more than that.

OMFUCKINGG!! I scrolled down father and no Rhian and Brian sex? I'm gonna keep lookin'.

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"When I get back home, I'd really like to be able to take you out."

-jumps up and down, exctited-
AWWWWWWEEEE!!! <333

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"Yes might be good...make me feel like less of a chump right now"

Babe, don't disappoint a beauiful Rock Star.
With dimples.

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"Thank god" he murmured, his lips meeting hers.

-sigh-
Awwe, no sex?

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"This movie is unbelievably fucking dumb" Brian muttered as he and Rhian lay on his bed watching The House Bunny. "Of course, I'm sure you'd disagree, what with it being a chick flick and all" he teased.

Pssh! Are you kidding me?
What losers!!!!!!!
Niether of you made a move; wow, fuck you two!

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"That's because there's nothing to figure out Rhian. We're two people who enjoy each other's company....what's there to analyse about that?"

Not much.
Go fuck, already!

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"Now now Miss Wilson, I do believe we decided on snuggling and nothing more"

Ugh, you FUCKface!
YOU WANT HER; JUST ADMIT IT, asshole!

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"Quit your worrying, I was a perfect gentleman, and Rhian was the one who helped you get changed" he told her with a smile, his eyes still closed.

She probably panicked that Zacky WASN'T the one who did it.
XD

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"You did no such thing, if anything it was Johnny that ruined it, little shit"

You three are so mean!
You should all be happy that Johnny, Jimmy, and I didn't push you into a swimming pool of mud for not fucking each other!

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"Andie, I'm not going to lie, I like you. But if the feeling's not mutual, then I understand"

Awww, it's is, it is!
Say it is!

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"That's not what I was going to say...I was just going to tell you that I have to get ready soon...it's just that I feel as though I need to spend time with you, you know, to make up for last night"

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Zacky's hearts went down.
Nevermind that's not funny. :[

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"I'll let you get ready"

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!!

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"Well...we tried, but foiled again!"

I'm so confused.

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"Oh you can bet your life I'd do that again!" Rhian exclaimed.

-claps like a lady-
Aye, aye.

I loved it! <33 I can't believe it's over. :( But it was amazing!
:D

This story is so amazing, you don't even know. Well actually probably DO know that, but I still felt the need to tell you guys that : )

Fuckk, you updated and nobody told me. :'( Damn, Mibba!

But anyways, I shall comment. :)

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Amber changed from her pajamas into a pair of yoga pants and a sports bra.

Hmm, I'm sensin' somethin'.
-continues to read-

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she smiled briefly at the tall man

Jimmmyyyy...?

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found his blue ones

I'm sure it's him, now. :D

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you look like The Rev from Avenged Sevenfold

It's because HE IS, WOMAN!!! How could you not know what THE REV. looks like?
Sorry.

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’m good at getting people to talk

ASK HIM ABOUT HIS HIGH SCHOOL DAYS! That oughta go well. XD

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“Nice to meet you,”

HAH! Jimmy's the nice guy and Brian and Matt are such assholes!
How does that work? XD
(Ok, shutting up and reading)

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This only confirmed her suspicions that the two men they’d encountered last night were none other than M. Shadows and Synyster Gates.

-sarcasm-
Really, Captain Obvious? I had no idea who those bitchy men were.
Thanks for the fill-in.

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This could be the perfect ending to their vacation.

But, m'dear, it's just begun! There's much more.
Please tell me there's sex in here.
O_O
It'd be awkward if there wasn't.

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“I invited Synyster Gates to come back to my room and he turned me down,” she said.

What an ass!
If I was his mom, which I'm not, by the way, I'd order him to be nice and DO IT!

OH GOOD GOD! EVERYone's nice, 'cept Brian and Matt!! -cries-
What'd they do to deserve such a position in the story?! -bawls-
I'm gonna go read.
-is better-

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Being the gentleman

O_O
WackZack...a gentleman? Wow.
-gets excited-

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Your chubby self practically crushed her,

BAHAHAHAAHAHHAAHA!!!
I love it!!!

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“Well excuse me,” he said with a chuckle.

-sarcasm- Wow, Matt, just wow. -claps, mockingly-
Way to be so fricken bipolar, asshole!

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They were so fucking loud they could have woken the dead,

Waking The Fallen. 8)
<333

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ho damn near melted at the sight of his dimples.

Good damn, Matt and his dimples! Stupid seducer!
GAHH!! I'd fall for that smile anytime.
Unless Brian's anywhere near.
Then I'd run to him, instead.

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Brian rolled his eyes

-swoon- Oh God, Matt has no control over this!
Brian and his chocolateism. <3333333

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“The only reason ya’ll won was because Shadows and Vengeance were completely distracted by Amber and Andie running around in those damn bikinis,”

Awwwweee! Somebody likes somebody!!
YAAAAAY!!

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“Oh my god! We’re going to dinner with five of the hottest guys in the world!”

-clears throat- Ahem, but I think Universe is like it.

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“So is Brian,”

Amen! :)

I loved it, update soon, guy! <33

Ahh! Yay!
Matt and Brian aren't complete assholes anymore. XD
That chapter was awesome. I'd love to play tackle football with the guys.
...among other things. >.<
I'm excited for more!