All I Wanted Was You - Comments

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So don't know if my comment went through or not, my page wasn't loading properly but I love the layout, it was very pretty. I like the story as well. It was written very well and it definitely keeps the reader reading. The first chapter is great and it definitely makes you wonder what's going on so you keep reading. It's very adorable, I will definitely subscribe.

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Omg love the layout, its very pretty. I like the story as well. The first chapter is great and it definitely makes you wonder what's going on so you keep reading.

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Well I'll start off by complementing your layout, I love love love the background. It's very pretty, in tone with the elegance of your writing too. I do think that the actual writing is very close to the edge of the box though, too close for my liking. It looks out of place.

I loved the opening of this! Oh my word, I never thought I'd see the day when someone described vomiting as well as you did! I loved the little quirks in this story, in your writing in general. The opening is strong, it didn't give me any real information about the story, well sure it told me that she was sleep deprived and had anxiety problems, but I needed to know more, so I was practically forced to read on to decide if I liked the story or not, and guess what? I did :) Great job.

I hope this story hasn't been completely forgotten about. I'm looking forward to the next update.

I'm enjoying your story thus far. I believe slang like wicked is pretty versatile if not than easily understood.

This first chapter has me intrigued as to whats going on with her, I mean exscally how much coarse work is she doing to have an attack so back it makes her vomite?

I'm not sure its good she has no friends at only being seventeen, and the girl who's helping her seems like she would be friendly enough.

I like your layout its nice it kind of makes the page pop out more I think but the writting is a tad small and is like right on the side on both sids so it looks really bunched up and I don't know just seemed a little weird and blurred to me but the whole lay out its self is nice and elegant and cute I like it

Much <3 Kat

It was nice to learn even more about Mikayla! This was a great update and I can't wait for the next one!

It seems like you are reasonably progressing his thoughts about Mikayla. There was no sense of rush during this or the last chapter. I can't remember it well, but his thoughts were okay. Every chapter I feel sort of bad for Mikayla seeing what she has been through and having Parker for a boyfriend just added stress in her life to be honest. Thankfully she was strong enough to break it off instead of clinging to him like every other high school girl that felt incomplete without a boyfriend on their arm. Mikayla may be stressed and a lot of other things, at least she knows what she wants and doesn't want when it comes to relationships. She's strong in that perspective. So good for her! Can't wait for the next one

I still think that they're totally in love.

Adorakable as always. So happy to see that they are slowly building something, a friendship I might say. I feel bad for Mikayla and can't help but wonder why her best friend turned on her. Frank does seem a little awkward while Mikayla was more in tune with what she was supposed to do haha she's a lot more focused than Frank that is for sure, doing homework, taking care of Bandit. Must be weird to have a teenager that he was supposed to entertain pretty much handle everything.

For some reason I had my settings set to not email when stories I'm subscribed to get updated :P Anyways, I really enjoyed the past 2 chapters! I just want them to get together! But I must be patient. Can't wait for the next update!

what a wonderful update :) it looks like mikayla and i share a love of the deftones!

Comment swap brought me here, and I'm not a big fan of Frank Iero or My Chemical Romance, but I like this story. I was hooked by the first chapter, the vivid details of what was happening made me feel like I was right there watching Mikayla empty out her stomach. I like your style of writing, I can't really describe it but it's not like, all over the place like when I read other stories. I also adore the layout, it gives me a certain feeling that this story was going to be good, ya know? I hope you update soon xx <3

Frank has a thing for her.
That is so obvious.

I want her and Frank to hook up already.
Oh yeah

loved the update! you use such beautiful imagery <3

Gah so sorry for not commenting! I have been super busy and didn't read the last chapter. So here it is, Lindsay is super sweet for helping Mikayla organize her time so she can finish her homework. Who wouldn't want an aunt and uncle so loving and caring like that? I wish my uncles and aunts were that attentive, yet again they have their own kids and not just a toddler like they do. Anyways, yay for Frank and Mikayla time! I found it hilarious that Gerard told Frank to occupy Bandit and Mikayla while he has sexy time and putting a time limit on it too. Wow, that was a little too much info haha. Hmmm, idk why but a smirk crept on my lips when Frank was over thinking things with whether or not Mikayla is a virgin or not and settled for she is. I think that is slightly awkward to think about seeing their age difference, but I found it adorable as well. Good think he can pull that off because it would have been just weird if he wasn't XD
Love your story and hope this makes up for the lack of comments. So sorry again. *gives you cupcake*

I love how "normal" you made the characters as opposed to the usual whiny dramatic teen girl named Ravonia or something. Great job:)

Love your writing style! Looking forward to reading this!

I really like this! I haven't read a Frank Iero story in such a long time, but I thought I'd check this out. You write really well and I can't wait to read more!