Oil Scripture - Comments

I really really love this story.
It's different, and it's very interesting. Mat and his art.
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I like it :)
I like the description and flow of the story, it all goes well together and it's quite original.
I've never come across a fan-fiction like this.
I really like the picture you used and you def. just reminded me about Kill Hannah, I haven't paid attention to them in so long.

The picture is sexy and so is this story. ;D But I'm a complete n00b and have no idea who Mat Devine is.
/is a loser
It also reminds me of Thirteen Reasons Why, just like world war me! said.
Lovely job once again! <3

Mat Devine is a babe.
I'm digging this story so far. :)

Loved it!! It's cheered me up very much!! I'm sooo glad that it's been updated, where would you be without my nagging XP.
I'm still mind blown at your descriptiveness it's very impressive!! It was a cute character! Squeal! there's soo much i wanna say but i can't put it into comprehendable sentences!! XD

Omigosh, I loved this!
The concept is so original. I don't think I've read an "artsy" fanfic, but I really enjoyed all of your descriptions and flow. Your style is really great, and I hope to catch up on this story and maybe subscribe =D

When I got the mail, I thought the same as Luckiest loser: YOU UPDATED!:D

Wonderful update, very real, like the readers are lurking around the gallery or looking at a movie! I love how detailed everything is, and though I usually am very impatient, I wouldn't have this story any other way than at the progress it goes now, it's perfect to the mood between Mat and Persia :)

this is a really well written story, and i felt like i was sitting in the shadows,
watching as they talked about the paintings. i could almost picture
each and every one of those paintings, especially the ice cream one. (:
and this story, in the way the stories are told,
kind of remind me of the book thirteen reasons why.

im subscribing and waiting patiently for a new chapter. (:

YOU UPDATED!!!
Hallelujah!
(Hallelujah for spell check too as that word is a pain in the arse to spell!)
I like how the story hasn't moved on very far, and I also like how there are stories behind the artwork :)

Oh Wow!

I'm actually in love with this. Its just so original.
You're descriptions are stunning. And your characters? They're are flawless.
This is incredible, update soon? :)

For a few moments, I didn't even know it was a fan-fiction. And yet, I love it.
Your writing is simply over powering by the way you describe things with a lot of passion. (And please don't feel uncomfortable that I used the word passion in this.. =_<)
Simply awsome.

You. What?

Dude... Wow. Oh My God. What have I gotten myself into? You're going to overpower me! :)
This was amazing. The description's immaculate, the content poetic. You're a fantastic writer, why haven't I stumbled across this before?

"his memory murky and distant from the world he knew" - That's magnificent. Simple, yet magnificent.

"One thing that Mat had become accustomed to after years of lack of sleep and deranged thoughts was that he was, in fact, nocturnal." - humour. I love it xD

"The moon saw so much, people just didn’t consider it as a significant enough part of their life, " - How very artistic,
I adore it! :D

There are many more I could point out (I highlighted each, and posted them in order. Hence why most of these quotes are early on in the story), but I don't want to praise you too much :P

wow, that was amazing. The details is just wow. The way you describe things just pulled me in and it made me feel like I was there.
Very well written :)
This is amazing, really great job.

Your descriptions and imagery are so awesome! Everything's so vivid (:
Great job~

This is fucking great! Can't wait for more, you write absolutely amazing.

This is so good! I love how in character Mat is, I know he's really hard to capture in writing. =] Thanks for writing & posting! Please keep going.

Okay just to make all your readers jealous- IM THE ONE THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR HURRRRAHHHHH! Roxane Simonezzzz you are officially awesome! Its beautiful! Mat is very lovable and Persia Hallaway (perfect name even if i do say so myself) weirdly reminds me of well....me! Shes very....different! The bus scene turned out better than i ever expected so well done! Also in chapter 1 you said an expression was 'etched' across his face- keep doing this! Keep using artistic words to describe things- like 'painted' across his face because it creates an arty theme throughout! Jamie is also a LOVELY name- i wonder y i think that!!!! hahahahaha! Oh and thanx 4 dedicatin chapter 2 to me! It pleased me greatly!!! Best work so far! Love it! Love you! Your the greastest Rox!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Wow, I just love your description and wording for everything! Pure talent is written all over this thing!

The descriptions are so good! You're very talented.
It's so vivid, I can clearly picture everything like I was there.
Great job. (:

You're very good with the details, and the descriptions and everything.
I think you've done a really good job on this.
And; it's not an obvious fan fiction; which is even better.