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  • Jade.

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    Awesome update!
    This is such an amazing story!!

    I just have to LOL at Mrs Iero, Good job, Frank. ;)

    More soon please ( =
    December 9th, 2007 at 02:22am
  • fountainhead

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    Aweh!
    What a gripping chapter. It was comical, told in a smart point of view, and depressing Cry
    Thank you horsie.
    Oh.
    And thanks again, for Mrs. Iero got
    PWNED!!
    December 8th, 2007 at 11:16pm
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    wow. great update more soon...!!
    December 8th, 2007 at 09:26am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Love the new addition to the layout :D
    Wow, that WAS an important chapter! So now they're blood brothers... Geez... it's pretty cruel. I mean, at least Mrs. Way's reasoning was more out of love, but Mrs. Iero is just acting like a stuck up bitch. Superstitions and society... loved the chapter, and your writing was pheonomenal as usual.
    December 8th, 2007 at 08:20am
  • adora68

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    I actually feel more sorry for Frank than I do for Mikey. All of the money and privilege he has don't keep him from loneliness. Mikey, in all of the squalor, at least has Gerard (even if he isn't the best influence ;)).
    December 7th, 2007 at 10:28pm
  • fountainhead

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    -Sighs-
    Why must they die, horsie, why? Gah.
    And Mrs. Iero? She's a daughter of a biscuit eating bulldog, that's for sure.
    OBVIOUSLY not in The Family. -nods- Raoul would be a better member.
    XD
    November 18th, 2007 at 02:11pm
  • waitingforsomething

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    Well, now they just HAVE to meet. The boys, I mean. You wonderfully brilliant author, you!
    I really liked how you made him pause halfway through the poem and recognize how hard it was to write the last lines. It brought more gravity to the situation.
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:13am
  • Angela Christine

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    Holy Heck!!!!
    This is an amazing story!!!
    7 kids? Jesus Christ!!!
    And I love how it's Bob's Point of view haha I can see this stuff actually happening too.
    November 18th, 2007 at 05:00am
  • Flu Rescent.

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    Oh, Bob.
    One thing I find interesting about this, is that Bob feels the need to just write at the end of most chapters. It's a refreshing way of ending the chapter with a nice touch.

    They die?? Oh man.

    A very good update :{D
    November 18th, 2007 at 02:13am
  • i love ande.

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    HOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLYHOLY
    FUCK!

    You are fucking amazing! What the fuck? It's so not fucking fair how much fucking talent you have! I fucking love this, okay?!

    You are the fucking best! FUCKFUCKFUCK! This is soooooo fucking amazing!

    FUCK YOU FOR BEING THE BEST FUCKING AUTHOR ON THIS FUCKING SITE YOU FUCKING GENIUS!
    hehe.

    That was my word of the day.
    November 17th, 2007 at 07:10am
  • i love ande.

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    HOLYHOLYHOLYHOLY
    November 17th, 2007 at 07:06am
  • Jade.

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    Hey, i'm a new reader and i suscribed.
    This story is amazing! I can't wait for more :)
    Please update soon =]
    November 17th, 2007 at 02:53am
  • waitingforsomething

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    The songs totally make it. I love how effective you are at keeping the right mood and atmosphere in your stories... I really liked it.
    October 28th, 2007 at 04:42am
  • fountainhead

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    o.O
    Wow. I loved the update; by far the best yet.
    Good job, horsie.
    October 27th, 2007 at 07:04am
  • Flu Rescent.

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    Annnnnd here come the kids! I suppose the more intense drama starts here, huh?

    Can't wait.
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:36am
  • lups

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    O____O IGNORE MY LAST COMMENT, PLEASE :D

    there it is little Frank! ^_^ and I can't help but grin at the fact that there's gonna be two of them O_O *shock* ZOMG two Franks... *stares into space* OH now I can see the whole thing, I think, but I'll rather wait.

    CAN YOU IMAGINE? I suddenly feel like writting again!!!!

    *combusts*
    October 15th, 2007 at 11:09pm
  • lups

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    ^_^ teehee I'm alive!!!

    I just read ch.3, and I got one question: HOW ON EARTH SI THERE GONNA BE A DELICIOUS FRANK IF MRS. IERO CAN'T HAVE KIDS? o_O

    seems like I should keep on reading ¬.¬
    October 15th, 2007 at 10:50pm
  • pariah.

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    My subscriptions page has more than doubled in the last week.
    October 11th, 2007 at 06:30am
  • pariah.

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    S'great. Keep writing.
    October 11th, 2007 at 06:30am
  • waitingforsomething

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    And that really IS how it feels to write poetry. This is interesting... Ray could be nice OR awful... Since you already talked to me about what's going to happen, I'm not going to talk much about the plot here. But I will say that I think you've done an excellent job. I could really feel Bob's apprehension as he was watching Ms. Way and Mrs. Iero.
    October 10th, 2007 at 10:08am