Aweh! What a gripping chapter. It was comical, told in a smart point of view, and depressing Thank you horsie. Oh. And thanks again, for Mrs. Iero gotPWNED!!
Love the new addition to the layout :D Wow, that WAS an important chapter! So now they're blood brothers... Geez... it's pretty cruel. I mean, at least Mrs. Way's reasoning was more out of love, but Mrs. Iero is just acting like a stuck up bitch. Superstitions and society... loved the chapter, and your writing was pheonomenal as usual.
I actually feel more sorry for Frank than I do for Mikey. All of the money and privilege he has don't keep him from loneliness. Mikey, in all of the squalor, at least has Gerard (even if he isn't the best influence ;)).
-Sighs- Why must they die, horsie, why? Gah. And Mrs. Iero? She's a daughter of a biscuit eating bulldog, that's for sure. OBVIOUSLY not in The Family. -nods- Raoul would be a better member. XD
Well, now they just HAVE to meet. The boys, I mean. You wonderfully brilliant author, you! I really liked how you made him pause halfway through the poem and recognize how hard it was to write the last lines. It brought more gravity to the situation.
Holy Heck!!!! This is an amazing story!!! 7 kids? Jesus Christ!!! And I love how it's Bob's Point of view haha I can see this stuff actually happening too.
Oh, Bob. One thing I find interesting about this, is that Bob feels the need to just write at the end of most chapters. It's a refreshing way of ending the chapter with a nice touch.
there it is little Frank! ^_^ and I can't help but grin at the fact that there's gonna be two of them O_O *shock* ZOMG two Franks... *stares into space* OH now I can see the whole thing, I think, but I'll rather wait.
CAN YOU IMAGINE? I suddenly feel like writting again!!!!
And that really IS how it feels to write poetry. This is interesting... Ray could be nice OR awful... Since you already talked to me about what's going to happen, I'm not going to talk much about the plot here. But I will say that I think you've done an excellent job. I could really feel Bob's apprehension as he was watching Ms. Way and Mrs. Iero.
This is such an amazing story!!
I just have to LOL at Mrs Iero, Good job, Frank. ;)
More soon please ( =