Oh, my god. Oh, my god! OH, MY GOD!!! I'm gonna cry. Really, really, cry. Was it she only slept with someone else once, or she's been cheating with someone for a while?
I was just about to make my way to classes to do my midterm project but while I was checking my mail, I saw that you updated. I was so excited that I dropped cheese from my hot pocket on my keyboard.xP They should break up!! We all knew that she slept around. And why is she always so... dirty?? Literally?? I mean, she's home, there's a shower available, and it's called hygiene. I freakin miss this story =]
AH! My jaw dropped when i got the e-mail for this! :D sorry about not commenting earlier...i had to leave the house when i got the e-mail so i bookmarked the page but forgot. Marley is a bitch. A huge one.
FINALLY!!!! Eli rips Marley a new one, cause I've been waiting for him to flip out since like March. Maybe he needs to call off the engagement, she's not being all fiance-ie. Maybe he should just (pardon the vulgarness) pull a dick move and have her come home to an empty house or something. Because currently she doesn't deserve Eli.
Keep up with the awesomeness that flows from your imagination!
I agree with Spurs_fan20. She better have a damn good reason for being like that. Maybe Eli and C'ara will get together? Maybe we'll find out more about the break up? Maybe, maybe, maybe? And maybe this was a lovely update. ;) Long overdue, but wonderful none the less.
I'm really loving the tension. And I can't believe she took off her engagement ring... for the whole tour! I mean, she could have put the ring on a chain and wore it as a necklace. Marley probably loves the guys just hitting on her all the time. Maybe fucked someone too? Maybe drunken sex also?? Oh man, what has Eli gotten himself into.... I love this =]
Omg, you have no idea how excited I got when I saw you updated! I honestly almost screamed, I was that excited. Your story is the one I've been waiting forever to be updated. I'm glad you finally did. It's all so intense right now! I can't wait to read more. I think it was sweet of Eli to help Cara out though. Wooo! I just can't believe you updated. lmao, :D (i realize i am a complete nerd now.. but it's aight.)
I feel so bad for Eli. D': I can't believe Marley's such a bitch now. She needs someone there to make her better personality show again. And I'm glad that Eli has C'ara now to make him feel less lonely. :) Lovely update, darling. :)
update soon :) i want to know what happens1!!!!