I think you shouldn't delete it. But if you want to stop writing it, just take one chapter and sum EVERYTHING up. But I think you should keep it on, so even if you don't want to see it ever again, other people can. Just my opinion though. :) Have not looked at the sequel yet. But I'm on it. ;)
NOOOOOO! Don't you dare delete this. D: I'll be super sad if you do. And yes, I did notice that sequel. Haven't had a chance to check it out yet though, I'll get right on it. :)
OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I did NOT see that coming! :D But could I be happier? I think not. :D I'm gonna go read the spin-off now and tell you what I think. <3 I don't care if you think it's crap, I love it along with all the other readers/subscribers. :D
I can't believe that Eli just proposed like that. It was such a quick decision. Maybe you should just have this story on a break. You'll never know when you feel like you want to write it again. =]
Mmm, I see a typo in the second paragraph; it's minutes. >< &&& Grrr, he should just go on tour with her after this next one, then they won't be all... Bleh. ):
TLM would be touring with All Time Low, The Maine, A Rocket To The Moon, and You Me At Six. -okay marybeth make this be irl.
Then, of course, she would dump me, run up to Ben, yell ‘Fuck the pregnant bitch,’ she’d shove her tongue down this throat, and they’d live happily ever after. I was glad to know that that wouldn’t be happening. -lol me too eli me too
Jsyk, I plan on speeding up the whole 'Marley is home' ordeal; I want her to leave yet again, and then come back. that's when the shit hits the fan. Dun dun duuuuuh. -uhm.I feel like I don't approve.
Wow. That's a shocker. Marley has just her whole like...her-ness. She used to be in her life with her friends and everyone now it's like it's only her. And she doesn't really care anymore. That's just the way I see it. I was so happy when I saw the update e-mail! Update soon!
To tell you the truth, I wouldn't exactly be amazed if Marley is sleeping with a couple guys from the bands, really. Eli should really... realllyyy talk to Marley. I feel really bad for thinking bad for Marley, but I can't really help it. I don't trust her. >___>
I thought Eli would be kind of upset with Marley for the loss of communication, and for changing so much. I think he'ss get mad at the band later, and randomly try to beat them up. Just a prediction. I really have no idea. :P