OMG!!! Paigie, that was hilarious! I read it on Quizilla and thought WOOT! ^^
May 12th, 2010 at 03:59pm
I really can't wait to see how this turns out. I loved the use of hummor in it and the way Brenda talks to her "husband", it makes her seem a little more out there :D
The only thing I think you could work on is double-spacing the paragraphs, instead of just hitting enter. It makes it much more easier to read and it makes it look much nicer :) That and your use of exclamation marks were the only things that really need work. You only need one exclamation mark to really get the point across. But other than that, I really liked it.