You shouldn't. I loved your story the way it was. It's normal you forget about things while you're writing, I do it all the time. That's why I reread my own story pretty often. It makes me more and more uncomfortable each time, but it helps keeping things in mind. I'm going to bed now, it's like 2.05 am here; but if I don't forget, I'll continue reading your stories when I get up again
Hey guys, ~~ how do you like the story banner Billie made for me?
I've begun the sequal (I haven't posted it on Mibba, yet though) and I need a title. I'd like something similar to Welcome To My World, Stranger. But I can't come up with anything... Maybe something like, Welcome To My Reality. or something.
I'm also not too happy with this story. I mean, there's lots of things I've written in there, that just get forgotten about. Like Arden. And the writing on Christopher's walls. School, Jane, Zaccheus' parents etc.
i love this, it's so sad and meloncholy. and even though all these terrible things are happening to him he doesn't go all despair and misery and self harm, like every other story on mibba (including mine D=) he still keeps living through it. this is such and amazing story.
are you going to carry on a bit more, or does the sequel take over from here? let me know when that come out =D
Oooo!!!! I LOVE THIS SO GODDAMN MUCH! -Hugs the story- Haa Pasco peed on him and I...flipped out and miniseizured when Chas died :'[ PM for sequal le please. &&love.
Squeep. Updatedness. Awesome. ... Was that the end? Or are you just talking about the sequel now for fun? DON'T MAKE IT END. Hehe. I'm kinda in love with Christopher XD
Guys, sorry about this, but I've edited chapter 16, because it kind of made the story possibilities go on more than I wanted it to. It'll be finished soon. ;)
If you'd like, I can PM you when the new story is up.
This story is fantastic. Evil parents. I just want to shoot them. Or at least his mom. Im not sure whats going on with his dad. ofmg. did Chris have like... a premonition?