Welcome To My World, Stranger - Comments

You gonna write a sequel, and I'll read that too ^^

and I wait for a kiss young lady :p

*starts cheering* KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS!!
:p

(I wrote a comment yesterday, but my mean computer didn't wanted me to post it *pouts*)

love you Jo-Jo!! This is amaaaaazing :D

I love this so much -Sigh- -Hugs you-

Squeee.
Update.
I wanna hug those two.

Sequel... YES PLEASE.
Are you really gonna end it, like, now?

More soon pleeease.
xox

Vampire Queen:

STFU Thanks.:

:| How would you guys feel if I wrote a sequal?

So you are just going to end it now?
Like right after Jack confessed about Rhiannon?
I'd love for you to write a sequel!!!!
Terrific update!!! :cute:

xoxo
Vampire Christina

:tehe: it's not finished quite yet.

STFU Thanks.:

:| How would you guys feel if I wrote a sequal?

So you are just going to end it now?
Like right after Jack confessed about Rhiannon?
I'd love for you to write a sequel!!!!
Terrific update!!! :cute:

xoxo
Vampire Christina

:| How would you guys feel if I wrote a sequal?

i loooooooooove your story!:]]

^ :lmfao

STFU Thanks.:

:tehe: OK. Christopher will be gay, Zaccheus bi.

:D

Yay!!

STFU Thanks.:

^^ Yeah, I suppose so. Hopefully I don't get bored with it (which means I'll stop writing the story :( )

No please don't get bored with it!! It's really good.

Don't you dare tel me it's Christopher's mommy! Don't!

:D OK guys. I've edited Chapter 14

Not much has changed in it, but I just added a few sentances.

STFU Elmo.:

BrokenGameBoy:

I actually have the story finished -Is guilty-
But I'm revaaaaalaediting everything besides what I've posted because it didn't suit the original story
And yeah, I'll post once the plot actually pulls together<3

But god, I love this.

And Chris;
Your Mom.
Haa. It's actually true though, the answer to your mystery is your mom.

I LOVE YOU JOSIE!

:D cool. I can't wait till I can read some of your stuff again. It'll be great.

shh. Don't tell Christopher anything. He has a right to be a dumbass.

:tehe:

Edit, Shite, I didn't edit that last chapter... -goes off to edit-

Haha, Chris is so smart! I think he could win the I'm smart award. :XD
Loved the update ^_^
I just hope smart *cough* Chris is okay.

xoxo
Vampire Christina

BrokenGameBoy:

I actually have the story finished -Is guilty-
But I'm revaaaaalaediting everything besides what I've posted because it didn't suit the original story
And yeah, I'll post once the plot actually pulls together<3

But god, I love this.

And Chris;
Your Mom.
Haa. It's actually true though, the answer to your mystery is your mom.

I LOVE YOU JOSIE!

:D cool. I can't wait till I can read some of your stuff again. It'll be great.

shh. Don't tell Christopher anything. He has a right to be a dumbass.

:tehe:

Edit, Shite, I didn't edit that last chapter... -goes off to edit-

STFU Elmo.:

BrokenGameBoy:

It's unique, for one thing <3

I LOVE this story because it's absolutely original and hilarious without overdoing it.
It doesn't rush into things, and that makes things appreciative; and when you use details, you use just the right amount.

Also, you've given each character identifiable personality traits.

But I have one question;
I know that they might be a little bit stunned laying togethor after something just happened to Zaccheus [Sp?]
But wouldn't one of them notice the vomit, blood and Milo in Christopher's hair?
I know it's stupid, but I would've O.o

:tehe: Thanks, Aarin.

Yeah. I 'suppose Zaccheus would've noticed it. I might re-type that last part so he does.
XD Next time I update, I'll edit that chapter.

Also, when are you going to update your kick-arse story? :cheese:

I actually have the story finished -Is guilty-
But I'm revaaaaalaediting everything besides what I've posted because it didn't suit the original story
And yeah, I'll post once the plot actually pulls together<3

But god, I love this.

And Chris;
Your Mom.
Haa. It's actually true though, the answer to your mystery is your mom.

I LOVE YOU JOSIE!

^ :con:

Thanks. I stole the idea from someone.

Squee.
Update :)

I haven't much to say on the actual chapter.
But that background kicks ass.

BrokenGameBoy:

It's unique, for one thing <3

I LOVE this story because it's absolutely original and hilarious without overdoing it.
It doesn't rush into things, and that makes things appreciative; and when you use details, you use just the right amount.

Also, you've given each character identifiable personality traits.

But I have one question;
I know that they might be a little bit stunned laying togethor after something just happened to Zaccheus [Sp?]
But wouldn't one of them notice the vomit, blood and Milo in Christopher's hair?
I know it's stupid, but I would've O.o

:tehe: Thanks, Aarin.

Yeah. I 'suppose Zaccheus would've noticed it. I might re-type that last part so he does.
XD Next time I update, I'll edit that chapter.

Also, when are you going to update your kick-arse story? :cheese:

STFU Elmo.:

:oops: um.. is that chapter OK? I mean, with Zaccheus & Christopher someplace lying next to each other outside?

:lmfao when I think of it, it sounds really weird.

I'm also changing Christopher's last name from Halen to Evans. OK? Cool.

(If you're enjoying this story, can you tell me maybe why?) thanks.

- Jo

It's unique, for one thing <3

I LOVE this story because it's absolutely original and hilarious without overdoing it.
It doesn't rush into things, and that makes things appreciative; and when you use details, you use just the right amount.

Also, you've given each character identifiable personality traits.

But I have one question;
I know that they might be a little bit stunned laying togethor after something just happened to Zaccheus [Sp?]
But wouldn't one of them notice the vomit, blood and Milo in Christopher's hair?
I know it's stupid, but I would've O.o

Vampire Queen:

Well, I like it because it's original and it's not first chapter someone falls for somebody and by chapter three they're having sex. It's got these details too that make it more realistic. That is why I love it. X ]

:tehe: thanks.