Here I Am, Once Again, I'm Torn Into Pieces - Comments

Yeah Jessica Thompson is a pretty common name. I use to get mixed up with someone named Jessica Lynn Thompson all the time. When my middle name was Ann.

haha my name is jessica larea thompson. but my nana's name is ann. odd.

Thank you! :D

That was amazing. :)

Oh and I took your advice Pam Halpert. It worked better and looks better I think after I made some changes!

I'm sowery! I was stuck on which way to take it. And Thanksgiving was crazy, I haven't been able to stay up late. Usually I write them when I stay up! :D

ugh! about time you updated! lol
you had me waiting for a while!
keep up the updates without the long period of time lol.
xoxo-jaii ;D

I just thought I would suggest a couple things to make your story better! Just two things, really.

The first is maybe a title change. 'Robert Pattinson a Love Story' really almost belongs in the short description rather than the title. It sort of tells what the story is about, but is too obvious for a title. Maybe a song name? That's the first place I look for story titles.

The second is spacing between paragraphs. It makes stories a whole lot easier to read.

Thanks I am glad you like it :)
I will update as soon as I can, since I just updated it.
I'm fixing errors now!

This is a good story. =D You better keep writing, even if im the only one who actually loves it!!!!
Upgrade soon!