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  • AtomicIero

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    I dont know what the fuck a beta is :] but can i be one? :D aha
    This story is amazinggg :D i love it. x
    October 2nd, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • Audioblue

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    Lemme suggest changing the font colors. The bright colors are a huge turn off, and it really hurts some of the readers' eyes.

    Two - you're not suppose to have links to characters in the summary. It's frowned upon, if I'm not mistaken.

    Three - Double space paragraphs and dialogue.

    Four - Get a beta.

    That's all the advice I have to offer.
    June 26th, 2010 at 06:29pm
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