I think you did a great job writing the torture. I wouldn't be able to do that, that's for sure. Wow, I just realise how much of a copycat I am, pretty much quoting my own previous comment, haha. Looking forward to the next chapter. xox
I think you're doing a great job writing this on your own, even though you hate the fact you co-writer left. I'm still loving every single bit of the story. Looking forward to the next chapter. xox