The World Is Outside - Comments

This really make me think :(( it's awesome

another awesome story =D

I loved it still!!!I cant wait for more and i wish you a happy ha.lloween!!

Oh my god i love it!!!!You are awesome!!By the way, though it was great and the plot was great i just wanted to share a litle cheerfull critism since i have to. Some words weren't exactly supposed to be there and i love your story when you wrote as in the author was narrating the story you cant put two people talking!Unless its just a side story to the accident but other than that minor detail its great!