Wow shocker im commenting haha dont worry im slightly mad at the moment wait when arent I? lol ANYWAY Gerard and Mikey hmmm.... This could go really far as the person before me said. I shall subscribe, and i cant wait for more =]
I like it, I think it has the potential to be amazing. You have writing talent, you'll go far kid <3 Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes.