Hollywood Whore - Comments

awesome. really enjoyed it. judging should be up in about 30 minutes. thanks for joining.

wow.

That's all i can say...

wow!!!!
Keep up the amazing work!!! :D
I love your stuff :D

Hello! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I really enjoyed this story! There were a few errors, but nothing big and it had some really nice plot twists! Having the last chapters mostly written as notes was a cool touch as well. Nice job!

I've just started, but it's good so far. I like the way you've gotten it across that since her and Frank stopped seeing each other, she's just given up. I'd like to see her a little less reliant on that fact, though. She's sort of sue-ish, but not really. Does that make sense? Haha. I don't know.

I like sort of the whole feeling of the story, which you've helped create with the colors of the layout. It's bleak and sort of hopeless, and makes the reader care for the main character, and they want to see things get better for her.

Really good job. :)

This story was great. Kind of makes me want to punch Frank in the face but..
I got a little teary-eyed when reading the notes.
I’m going to started reading the sequel maybe later on today.

Caught up and loving it:)

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Poor frank he finally relized it all
i wonder what's going to happen next,
loved the update

Awe, loved it!
:)

Hurry Gee!!
Loved the update
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loved it! sequel!
wonder what the other letters are going to say

Is she going to die? o.o

what is she going to do?!

WHAT IS SHE GOING TO DO?!
DAMN YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY SO INTERESTING

I like your story so far. I wonder what Jessica is going to do.... Update soon!! = D

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

i like this! do you want me to make you a banner? this is good!

Loved it!!

Iero go to hell

What kycool girl said :)

this is amazing