Hollywood Whore - Comments, page 2

secrets-that-die (100)

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Can't wait for more
<33

November 6th, 2009 at 10:53pm

The Color Abi (300)

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You have a lot of spelling/grammar/wrong use of words [like you mix up their and they're a few times] in this update.
You may want to go back and re-read through this.

November 6th, 2009 at 09:50pm

William Beckett (100)

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Woooooooo! :)
It's great!

November 6th, 2009 at 05:47am

IFallinReverse (100)

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Cant wait for more! XD

November 5th, 2009 at 11:20pm

The Color Abi (300)

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Wow! I really like this story so far.
It's really interesting although you might want to re-read the first line of the summary - you've spelt something wrong :)
I'm subscribing for sure!

November 5th, 2009 at 01:53pm