November 9th, 2015 at 09:19am
Comment swap
I love the first chapter. It pulls the reader in and makes them wanting to continue to read. It leaves you with so many questions. Your spelling and grammar is really good, I didn't notice any mistakes. This is the first Twilight fanfic I've read and I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
EDIT: also a perfect use of david bowie. 10/10