Two Minutes Can Be a Very Long Time When You're Waiting... - Comments

@ Ashes to Graphite
Thanks! I did do well :) I mostly just tried to epitomise a typical teenage boy, really, with loads of younger siblings. Plus, not many people write unlikeables these days haha! But thanks for the comment - not bad for the rookie I was back then :D

So, first things first, I really liked this story! Be confident, you are a good writer! Second of all, major brownie points for writing a particularily unlikable character, I don't know if it was just me, but this guy is not my cup of tea, and that is awesome! Is that allowed? (I tease.)

No, but seriously, I think you did a great job with two minutes and a very pessimistic character. Congrats, I hope you did will on it in class!

--Ash

From the summary, I thought this was going to be a joke. But after reading more of this, I realize that I actually can relate to it some what. "I can't hear my mother's screams as she gives birth to yet another demon child." Props! This line took my breath away and I absolutely love it. For some reason I can connect with this character slumping into a hospital chair in pure rage at that. Although I have a beautiful baby brother who is almost eight years old, I can't handle any other child and think of them almost the same way as this soon-to-be demon child coming out.

Props, I love this.

Sporker, you're my effin' idol, did you know that?

You really are an awesome writer and it takes my breath away (in a positive way, apart from the fact that the breath is gone...) to read your stories - you're simply an awesome writer; the words you use, the things you compare with and the way you describe things plus a lot more... I think it's awesome; you are awesome!

Keep it going, man... I love your stuff.

xOxO