Tangled In Lights - Comments

btw, apologies for my rat/mouse faux pas. im not very up on small rodents! xx

well, things ARE getting interesting! peronally i think jamie needs to man the fuck up cause NZ is great and someone should really just teach her how to use skype and tell her to get on with it. i do spose she wants to do the whole growing up thing thouhg, i hope that doesnt happen to me when i turn 30. but thats ok, its aaages away. loved the line about making pasta and listening to jack johnson btw that truly is the essence of losing your sense of adventure hahahaha.

bj and tre are hot, i think we need more action there tho. get on it!

as for macy,hmmmmm. i dont really think shes done anything too bad so far. i mean, who wouldnt flirt with tre cool, whether he is shagging billie joe or not? really its up to tre to spurn her advances and if he doesnt he needs a slap because if you had to choose between billie joe and some girl, surely bille joe would win every time. spose i might not be a reliable perspective tho.

get on with it, miss R, wheres the next chapter!

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I do not like that Macy trollop, I do not like her one bit! I hope people see through her, and she gets her come-uppance, or I am being totally judgemental and unreasonable? The truth will out. Come on Jamie, a year with Jay in New Zealand sounds fab, and I love how poor Tre always seems to put his foot in it! Still loving this story.

gah I could worship you for updating XD thankyouthankyou

*internally screams* Cliffhanger? A cliffhanger when Jay may or may not have been about to tell Jamie about his offer! Sheesh. And, that Macy girl? She wants Mr. Cool now doesn't she? She said he was hard to get a hold of and was leaning closer to him than maybe she should... Does she know that BJ will cut a bitch and Jamie too? This already started out with Tre vulnerable, missing BJ. Then, the talk about him looking and chickadees? Of course he is, but I'm catching on here. Maybe. Is it wrong that I don't want Tre going anywhere, but I want Billie Joe to hook up with Jamie while maybe Jay is away? Predictions, I guess.

Sorry about the rant of a rambling mess.

Well that Macy Green has got my hackles up already, is she making a move on our Tre? Thankfully he seems to be resisting so far - good boy! The way you write baby Brixton is so cute, and quite typical of some kids, the screaming all the time reminds me of my boy when he was young. I am pleased Jay is finally going to tell Jamie, I can't wait to find out how she reacts. Thanks for another welcome update

I had so much of this to read. Nearly five chapters I would say. I didn't get on for a few days than Rev from A7X died and broke me down. It's good to be reading such an awesome story that is Green Day. Even though I want to slap Jay for note telling her about the offer. Ugh! It's killing me, and that is the point.

I just finished Crowded today so I was so happy to see there was a sequel! I love how current the story is with the musical and everything. I'm excited for more so keep up the good work :)

Oh, and the Tubbies just made my day XD

every time you update this, you make my day :')

Another update - bliss. I love how you write Joey, what a cutie he is, and as for Tre's response to knowing how to make Mike scream, I laughed out loud. I so agree with your friend above (who can't tell a rat from a mouse, but I'll forgive him!) "OMG if tre even DARES go chasing vaginas i am going to get angry", I couldn't have put it any better if I tried for ever and a day. Fantastic update, fully deserving of many many more complimentary comments. Thanks for finding the time to keep updating!

well well well. things are getting tangled. like our friend with the mouse says, things sound like theyre gonna kick off soon. jay is still cool as, i think he should for defo come to NZ.

the hot tubs bit was fucking genius, i proper lolled my head off when tre asked mike to undo his pants. bjs worries about the album are adorable and proper realistic. i still think your inside his head.

and OMG if tre even DARES go chasing vaginas i am going to get angry. fucking bisexuals piss me right off. poor BJ, feel free to write dr tunnock back into the story to cheer him up if needed.

you really are awesome my darling and i dont get why there arent a hundred more comments on this. love you babygirl ;) xx

You have got my stomach in knots. Is Tre going to give in to his woman cravings (major worry there), is Jay ever going to tell Jamie about 'Steven'? And then you finish off with the Foxies making me smile so much my face hurts - phew. You most certainly are on a roll!

Personally ZR, I adore the fact that this story has so much Jason in it. If everyone read Crowded, no one would ever say 'who the hell is Jason White?' That ACTUALLY broke my heart. But it was all better cos Jason's got Lara and Lara is quite clearly awesome. ;)

I'm just writing a load of old shit. I told you it was awesome and great and I think you should post the next chapter sharpish! ;)

Oh and you have to include lots of 'baby girl's from now on. It sends me into a God damn frenzy and I LOVE it.

Lol! I was actually in the area at the time but couldn't bring myself to go.
And thanks Tracey! I have another update written... That's 3 chapters in as many days, maybe the block is lifting! Xx

HAHAHA i totally saw american idiot at the berkeley rep.

What a lovely belated christmas present. Love the idea of having drunk rockstars littering the house, and shopping with Billie Joe sounds fun. Glad the writers block seems to be lifting. I remember waiting for absolutely ages for Crowded to be continued, so a little wait like this is a breeze compared to that!

I'll be patiently waiting to see what goes on during their shopping trip.

Well this update was certainly worth the wait. And I am so glad you are still writing fanfiction!

Thank you all for your comments! Sorry I'm a little slow at updating right now, I'm really busy but I'm still writing... just taking a little longer than usual.

I love Jay and Jamie too, writing them makes me feel warm inside, haha.

And Tracey, I don't really find this stuff hard to write, writing things that ARE hard to write takes too much brain capacity for me right now. These particular characters seem to flow easy for me, which is why I'm still writing Green Day fanfiction when I should really be writing something sensible... haha!

xxx