Everything I've Ever Wanted - Comments

I think this is one of my favorites, but that might just be the massive soft spot i have for my alma mater (let's go gophers!!) and all of dinky town.

Post the sequel please. I think it's taking forever.

I'm excited for the sequel :)

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i loved this story and i'm definitely pumpedd for the sequel (:

Being in the hockey house just made me think of all the good times I had with him. I thought about New Years Eve, when he punched that guy out for hitting on me. I remembered studying with him at the kitchen table for our last finals in college, and all the wonderful romps in the sheets we had in his room upstairs, a room that now happened to be Joey's. - - I miss him Tony!

I couldn't move, couldn't turn, couldn't even breathe. My whole body was frozen with absolutely, pure joy. And as fast as my functions stopped, they began again and I whirled around. My eyes locked on Tony's as my body shook, a loud scream escaping from my lips. - - OMG I'm like as excited as she is. :D

I thought going to San Jose would refuel my love for hockey. The team and the atmosphere would show me how much hockey still meant to me. But it didn't. When I left, all I felt was an empty hole where my heart used to be because it didn't go with me to California, it stayed here with you." - - Awwww Tony!!!!!!

"I'm so in love with you, Molly. I never knew I could feel like this. Me and you, that's what is right. That's what feels so damn good, better than having fans and a lot of money. I just want you, and I'll be okay." - - Oh I missed Tony! Love him.

"Funny you should mention a wedding..." - - YES! YES! YES!

"Will you marry me and have a hockey team full of babies with me?" - - OH HELL YES SHE WILL!!!!!!

And finally, the two of us were holding everything we've ever wanted, in each other, and in the future. - - Thank God!!! From the first chapter of this story I prayed they'd end up together. WOOO HOOO.

I love a good happy ending and you just gave it to us. I hate to see this story end, but I'm so glad it ended happy and it was an amazing ride. This was such a sweet love story with ups and downs and a heavy dose of reality at just the right times. I mean it when I say I want you to write my love story. I want to become one of your characters and have you make a man fall this deeply in love with me.

OH and **Fist Pump** a Sequel. Can't wait to see what you come up with for Tony and Molly next.

aww such a sweet ending!
couldn't have been more perfect!
I'm so excited for the sequel!

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ARE YOU KIDDING ME?
That was the best "ending" to any story I've ever read.
I can't believe he gave up hockey for her but I guess I understand why he did.
It's sweet, actually.
And the proposal was perfect.
Honestly, Bri, this is the best thing you've written.
Every single chapter you had me completely enthralled with the beautiful relationship you created.
I'm going to miss this so much.
BUT YAY SEQUEL!
<3333 you!

tearjerker for sure!

man, today I'm only reading stories that have me gaping at the screen with my jaw dropped because I just can't believe it!
Tony is a BEAST of a man. you know why? because he's not too macho-manly-man-ish (phew, what a word combo!) to let himself realize that he needs Mol more than his next breath (*melts* ;P )

and I'm already looking forward to the sequel and I've already subscribed! yay!

I'm sad it's over but happy there is a sequel. This has to be one of my favorite stories I've ever red on here. I felt so much emotion in every chapter. You wrote every chapter so well. Not going to lie, I did cry in the last chapter.

oh my god i never thought he would quit for her but i hope minesota or something picks him up because i really cant imagine tony being anything but a hockey player....i cried in this chapter too it was soo sweet and cute and u used ur best writing skills for this...im utterly shocked but im so glad there is a sequel! cant wait :P

please be a happy ending.
i loooove this story.
& i want them togetherrr :(
i just want them haaapppy togetthheerr forrreveevrrrr

Tony had been gone. His birthday had come and gone, the only way to celebrate via Skype with a bottle of wine and the presents I had sent him earlier in the week. It was depressing to watch him tear open the paper and laughing, smile, murmur a thank you, but not be able to hold him, to be near him, to feel the heat of his body next to mine. - - awwww I so feel for her. That blows.

we have been together since our junior year in high school, and both of us just graduated from college last spring." Laura murmured, eyes shining brightly at her soon to be husband. I ignored the sick twist in my guy, recognizing the look as the way I stared at Tony. - - another awww - how hard must it be to be around happy couples. Yuck - should have jumped at the family photos.

"Good. I had my first shoot today." I shrugged, starting my car up and cradling my phone to my chest. - - poor thing - she should be so happy about her new job.

“I love you too.” I hung up after that, ignoring the stinging in my heart that told me as long as Tony was away, my heart would never be whole. - - I know they are doing the mature thing and dealing with their seperation, but is it so wrong to wish they wouldn't and she'd just go to him anyway?

I wondered if her hair was up or down, down meaning she was feeling alright, or up if she was tired and crabby. I thought of her eyes, if they sparkled like I remember or if they had dulled with my absence. I thought about her laugh, and just the thought of the light, airy sound made me smile and let out a slight chuckle. - - Right, now I remember how you made me love your Tony. Stuff like this. :D

To be more specific, Skype was the best thing invented. I shrugged off that thought, feeling warmth spread through my body when I thought of my birthday, and how I pulled molly out of her comfort zone, and her clothes, with just a little sweet talking. - Ahhhhh - Skype sex!!! Woo hooo - go Tony!

"Babe, remember, nothing in live is supposed to be easy. That's what makes the pain worth it. At the end of this, we can laugh at the pain we feel right now and let go." I insisted, not able to stand the pain of her suggesting we end it, throw everything to the wind - - Very bad suggestion Molly! Very Very Bad!!!! You think you're miserable now - try breaking up. That would be God awful. Don't be crazy!!!! (was my rant long enough?)

No break up - Happy Ending - you can't take us this far only to break them up!!!!

I can't believe there is only one more chapter!!! I want to know what happens, but I don't want it to end. Hows that for mixed emotions.

HAPPY ENDING...HAPPY ENDING...HAPPY ENDING...HAPPY ENDING...

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Wahhhhh.
That's me crying.
That chapter sucked...not the writing, what actually happened.
Fix it.
Seriously, don't even think about doing something crazy.
I will come to Minne and hit you.
<3333 you, Briannaaaaaa.

i think tonys gunna fly back to the twin cities, propose and whisk her back to california. then i predict you are going to write a sequel.

i also predict that my happy butt is gunna be at the u in approximately 3 weeks for orientation and I CANT WAIT!

aw :(
cant wait to see what happens next!

you're right not many people know Tony and if this story didn't exsist, I wouldn't now him now still...
I guess that comes with living across the big pond ;D

aaaanyway, I'm excited to see what Tony has up his sleeve :)

I loved the update! I cant wait for the last chapter! They better not break up!! More soon!

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