Everything I've Ever Wanted - Comments

  • Honestly Brianna, this is probably the best chapter you've ever written.
    The description & the emotion in the beginning was so real it was like literally pulling on my heart strings.
    I don't want this to end.
    It has become one of my fave stories on here.
    <333 you!
    May 7th, 2010 at 07:35pm
  • such a good update, looking forward to the next!
    May 6th, 2010 at 05:47am
  • I loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens with these two separated! Hopefully they make it through!
    May 6th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • i loved this story and i really dont want it to end! plese please write a seqel? molly and tony just seem so perfect....i think she should move to san jose to be with him!! plus she could follow her dreams still..there are a alot of photography studios in san jose too!
    May 5th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • so sad =[
    it makes me sad =[
    where are the babies?
    this story needs more babies...
    May 5th, 2010 at 10:37pm
  • finally read all of this! I love it, cant wait to see what happens next!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 05:35am
  • I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment!!!

    Tony was about to be uprooted halfway across the country, and too far away from me. A sick twist in my gut rocked me as I thought of tomorrow. - - awwww I feel so bad for her. The whole leaving thing sucks!

    "Cause those curls are going to be demolished when I'm done with you tonight." His eyes twinkled lustfully as I backed out of the bathroom, throwing Tony a smirk before I shut the door behind me. - - sometimes it can make your hair curl more. Just Sayin'. LOL

    Are you going to cry? I chuckled at the last one, looking at the ditzy blonde who was dating Alex Kangas. - - Ah yeah. And I probably will too!!!!

    "I want to mean enough to him that he doesn't go." I pursed my lips against the loud sob that racked my chest, sucking in a deep breath through my nose. - - Poor Molly. I want him to stay too, but he has to go.

    []i]"Don't. Please, just don't." Tony whispered, his green eyes holding pain in them as I looked down, giving him a desperate look. "If you ask; I will." - - I love how he can read her mind. God you have me in tears. Stop that!

    "I know why you are, and I'm serious. Everything will be okay. Just enjoy this." - - I just love them together, and I have complete confidence that he will make sure everything is OK.

    Please don't make me too sad next chapter. I was all teary with this one, just thinking of him leaving. I hate that the end is near, but these two need to have a happily ever after. PLEASE!!!!!!!
    April 30th, 2010 at 04:12pm
  • I haven't quoted in a while because I've been lazy but there were so many good ones this chapter!
    "We're cuter than them, babe. Don't worry."
    Bahahahah, best thing Tony has ever said.
    Tony stated, listening for a response before grinning widely at me. "Fuck that, I'm well past second, and I'm most definitely rounding third."
    OMG.
    Hot.
    "Don't cry. You know I'll make sure everything is okay." Tony murmured to me, his lips brushing against mine teasingly as slapped at his shoulder.
    Mhmmm, I'm sure he will.
    Gosh, please just don't ever end this.
    I'll miss it so much if you do.
    <333
    April 28th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • : D
    April 27th, 2010 at 12:50pm
  • I loved the update! I hope him going to California doesnt ruin their relationship, and if it does hopefully its fixable! more soon please!
    April 27th, 2010 at 06:01am
  • so here are my feelings
    kara & joey = cute beyond belief
    tony & molly & balcony = germs
    story winding down = bad.
    love, kara.
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Gahh, sorry it took so long to comment.
    But, I loooove you.
    Don't ever end it, okay?
    OMG, el Capitan?
    That's priceless.
    I'm nervous for them.
    If you break them up, I will never speak to you again.
    More soon. <3
    April 24th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • Tony would be leaving in the middle of August, two weeks before his birthday, to report to San Jose for training camp. I would not be joining him on the west coast, instead, I would be beginning my new job here in the cities. - - NOOOO! you are separating them. Don't do it Bri. She should go with him.

    "I'm going to kick your ass if you ever call her honey again. She isn't your honey; she's mine." - - Love Jealous Tony. How adorable is he.

    Sorry baby, it's just your hand and el capitàn tonight." Tony frowned at that, shaking his head in disagreement. - - LMAO Love the name, and what's a little pain. hehehe

    Do you believe that distance makes the heart grow fonder?" He wondered.
    "Yes. I just wish we didn't have to learn that form our own experiences."
    - - Awwww. You're killing me.

    try to wrap my head around the fact that I'm going to be alone for a majority of the next year." Tony sighed deeply, scrubbing his face very roughly with his hands as he groaned loudly. "Fuck, I'm not ready." - - Poor tony. Molly so needs to go with him. Just sayin'.

    "Yes. We will be." - - Promise me! Please!!!!!

    No break-ups, I can deal with sad departures, since it seems like I have to, but no break-ups, K? I vote he leaves and they can't stand it and she moves with him. :D That's my vote. I love these two. And I'm a hopeless romantic, so don't do anything crazy. And if you are going to do anything crazy, let me know K, I need my cry warning.

    So glad you updated. I love this. I really missed them and now I need some Eric Decker.
    April 22nd, 2010 at 12:29pm
  • I think it's sweet that Tony encouraged Molly to follow her dream too since, if she had let the opportunity pass her up she would have likely regretted it. I hope their long distance relationship works out, that or if Molly finds another job as a photographer out in the bay area with Tony.
    I'll miss these two together hopefully they'll be able to make things work and there won't be a lot of drama but, long distance relationships are almost always very hard on couples.
    April 22nd, 2010 at 10:43am
  • ahhhh make her go with himmmm!
    April 22nd, 2010 at 02:51am
  • Aww, Molly and Tony are adorable together, I hope they stay together, if not, I hope Tony gets his ass in gear to win her back. I love it. I am said that it's ending soon. :'( Can't wait for more.
    April 21st, 2010 at 07:47pm
  • : D
    April 21st, 2010 at 01:15pm
  • =D loved the update. I think tony's cute the way he's so protective , even if its just some dweeb calling his GF honey...
    it's cute... in a throw me over your shoulder and take me back to your cave kinda way...
    great update.
    can't wait for more
    April 21st, 2010 at 07:39am
  • aww (:
    I love Tony and Molly.
    I have a feeling that drama might errupt a little bit, but I could be wrong.
    Hopefully drama though (: lol
    more, please!
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:51am
  • I loved the update! They are too cute together! They better end up together!!! More soon please!
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:29am