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  • layna loves her caps

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    oh my gosh this was so unbelievably cute!
    poor tony, mono's a bitch but at least he's fully recovered and obviously ready to go ;)
    can't wait for more, as usual.
    February 6th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • Jessica;

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    I liked this chapter...lots.

    "A gutter." Jordan finished for him, pounding fists with Tony who's lap I was sitting on.
    Oh my love...so witty.

    "It's alright babe. You're still better than these two on the ice," Jess smirked as I shook my head at her.
    Ahahaha, gotta stroke his ego, I suppose.

    "On and off the ice, right Molly?" Kara asked, slapping hands with Mike and giving him a peck on the lips.
    So true.

    "Okay pretty boys." Jordan pulled Jess into his side, dipping her and making a show of kissing her.
    Shpw off...not that I mind.
    Okay, I'll stop quoting me & Jordan now.

    "He's hot. Just so you know, I'd leave you for him."
    Tony, be jealousss.

    "Blow jobs. Maybe a little rub and tug under the table when we go out to dinner."
    OH.MY.GOD.
    HAH.

    The end was really depressing, btw.
    More soon yeah?
    <333 you!
    February 5th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • Kirsten;;

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    May I say I am absolutely jealous of you for meeting Tony! God, I hope you have a good time. Loved the story. Even the part where Tony is telling Molly how she's going to make up for not doing the dirty with him. Mmm, loved it!
    February 5th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • Miss Goldy Gopher

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww tonyyyyy
    poor baby

    and on another note - you getting to meet him?!?! tottalllyyyy not fairrr!
    February 5th, 2010 at 02:07am
  • Missy001

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    Where are you going to meet him on Saturday? Good luck and have fun!! If you remember, ask him what his golf handicap is!! :)
    February 4th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    that had to have been one of the cutest and saddest - probably more sad than cute - things i've ever read.
    i can't even imagine what it would be like to know that you may not play hockey again. so sad!
    another (prefereably happier) update soon?
    February 4th, 2010 at 04:25pm
  • PensRock

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    "Whatever. This here is captain clutch. He knows how to do it."
    "On and off the ice, right Molly?" Kara asked,
    - - she may not admit it, but she knows it's true. :D

    "Do not drink that." Tony told me, stepping in between the men in the back and me. He pulled my chin down so his head was blocking their view of me, his lips hovering over mine. His breath danced across my lips, his eyes softening from jealous and angry, to sweet and caring as he smiled lightly down at me. He licked his lips before dipping his head all the way, his lips setting ever so softly against mine. - - I like jealous Tony. Very sexy kiss there baby!

    "Tony Looch!" A voice called from across the bar. We both looked up as Eric Decker walked in, striding in as people whispered and pointed at the star receiver. - - YES! A little Decks to go with our Looch! Nice.

    "He's hot. Just so you know, I'd leave you for him." - - HAHAHAHA Love the Tease Molls
    "That's cute. Not." Tony rolled his eyes at me, placing several kisses against my neck, teasing me with his teeth and tongue. "You would never leave me." - You are so right Tony. So right.

    "What do you suggest?"
    "Blow jobs. Maybe a little rub and tug under the table when we go out to dinner." He shrugged, "I guess it's really up to you."
    - - HAHA Well at least he knows what he wants right?

    A tear slipped from my eye as he lumbered very slowly from the ice. He tapped fists with each little kid who leaned over the railing until the Lucia on his back finally disappeared. - - how is it in two paragraphs you make me go from laughing at the rub and tug under the table to teary at the no more Gophers hockey for Lucia thing. :-( Damn your good girl

    I moved his arms away, wrapping them around my waist as his head fell against my chest. I kissed the top of his head lovingly, letting him cry softly into my body. - - Your description of her crawling over him and him crying into her is really beautiful. I know most of my comments are usually fun - silly, but You are such a good writer and this scene was particularly graphic and heart breaking. In and incredibly good (as it should be) kinda way. Loved it.

    Normally, seeing any man cry was weird to me because it showed a form of weakness that I couldn't quite understand with someone so masculine. But in Tony's tears I didn't see weakness, instead I saw the strength and love it took to show someone exactly how you were feeling even though expressing himself was a total role reversal. And instead of being totally turned off by the fact that he was crying, watching him break down made me love him even more. - - Awwww. Just awwwww.

    Loved the update so much.
    Loved Tony all weepy - very sweet
    Loved Molly - what a good girlfriend
    Loved Eric Decker and his hot self showing up at the bar
    More please.
    February 4th, 2010 at 03:42pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    February 4th, 2010 at 12:05pm
  • Kirsten;;

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    I loved this chapter! It was amazing, so happy Tony is no longer an ass, and has forgiven Molly. Yeah!
    January 31st, 2010 at 12:08am
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    I whimpered softly as his hand rested on my shoulder, his lips pressing against my cheek softly. "Baby, you need to eat and drink something, you'll start to feel better." - - Thank God. I didn't think you'd have him leave her, but I wondered for a second.

    I could get used to this," I sighed in his arms, wrapping mine around his neck, my head resting on his shoulder. He chuckled softly, turning sideways through his bedroom door.
    "Don't. It only happens on special occasions."
    "Really? Like when?"
    "The days I love you, also known as the days that end in y."
    - awww Tony. I'm starting to forgive you.

    Oh. My. God. Tony dropped his towel, having no idea I was sitting up behind him with my eyes wide open. My mouth dropped open. With our time apart, I had forgotten how damn good Tony's butt looked. I licked my lips and put a smirk on them as he turned around OK there's a cure for a hangover if I ever heard one. LOL

    Mike and Kara were full on in the nude, soaking wet after getting out of the shower. They continued to kiss, not even paying attention to me as I stood there mortified. OK another hangover reliever I imagine. HAHAHA

    I should have picked up by how you didn't want to go to the doctor, how you weren't getting better, and how frightened you looked, but I never did. - - Yeah, maybe he should have picked up on that. LOL.

    I love kids, I really do, but the thought of having my own has always given me the creeps. But this time, it didn't when I thought about having babies with you. And that's what scared the shit out of me. - - Awww Tony. That's better!!!!

    I love you, Molly. I love you so much that it hurts, and it freaks me out. I'm terrified of my feelings for you and how strong they are. I'm scared that you have completely changed the way I think about relationships and love. - - YEAH!!! That's cuz it's real love Tony. You Love her and someday she is going to have your babies.

    I can't lose you and God knows I never deserved you, but you chose me and I've done nothing but take you for granted." - - OK I officially forgive you.

    I loved that Molly apologized too. I'm glad she came to her senses about Dakota *cough-tramp-cough* and how that's not his fault.

    I don't care what you say about me. Tell me I'm and idiot and that I need to be more careful. But don't talk about her like that. Like she's some fucking gold digging whore who wants me for the name on the back of my jersey. Don't judge her like she's the girls I dated in high school because she's not and I'm going to marry her someday. I love her. She loves me, and we're going to be together whether you're with it or not." - - I love that he said this to his dad. Go Tony! Very very sweet! You're so having babies together someday.

    [Hmm, well you know I don't put out on the first date..." I reminded him, repeating the conversation from our actual first date.
    "Then it's a good thing this isn't our first. - - Perfect - just perfect.

    So freaking glad they are back to normal and doing the dirty again. What a happy couple. It's so freaking sweet I can't take it (I hope that didn't sound sarcastic - I really do love it).

    So Tony's out of the doghouse. He did real good at a making up. YEAH LUCIA!!!! And Molly - from now on you tell him shit OK?

    Love the update! MORE...MORE...MORE
    January 30th, 2010 at 08:11pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    oh my gosh! this chapter + the snow currently falling outside = pure happiness.
    i'm so glad shithole tony is long gone and they're a happy little couple again.
    and damn, what tony said to his dad has to be one of the cutest things ever (like him defending her, not that their conversation was cute)
    January 30th, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • Jessica;

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    YES!
    Finally.

    "The days I love you, also known as the days that end in y." He gave me a kiss on the nose and laid me back in his bed.
    Aww, I want someone to say this to me...so cute.

    He padded across the floor to his closet, pulling out a shirt and a different pair of jeans, my favorite that hugged his- Oh. My. God. Tony dropped his towel, having no idea I was sitting up behind him with my eyes wide open.
    Ahahahahaha...talk about a NICE wake up call!

    "Ick. Did I really say that?" He wondered, his hands going to my hips and dipping beyond the waistband.
    Haha, yes Anthony, you did.
    As crazy as it sounds.

    "Oh! I didn't get clean enough!" He exclaimed, pulling his sweatshirt off in a haste.
    Nice try, kid.

    I had now seen three people naked in the span of ten minutes.
    Too much.

    "That's too bad. Maybe you need to see mine again." He suggested, getting ready to flash me.
    LMAO...he would.

    "Did I interrupt something?" He wondered, diving onto the bed and snuggling in between us.
    Joey is like birth control for goodness sake.

    Okay, I'm really glad they're back together...obviously.
    But what the eff Don?
    Way to judge.
    I loved that Tony got all angry and was defending Molly, though.
    More soon yeah?
    <333 you!
    January 30th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • sweeterthansweettea

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    I think I really like this chapter too :)
    glad they're back together!
    and no more asshole Tony
    January 30th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    January 30th, 2010 at 06:21pm
  • tiffaannyyy

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    mmm sooo the beginning made me happy :)
    Tony taking caree of Molly.
    it was tres cute.

    "But I'm going to get better at that. Starting right now, I'm going to make better decisions for us and in terms of hockey. Asshole Tony is gone. I promise."

    "Me either. He takes the things I love away from me."


    YAY ! I AGREE. :)
    im so happy this break was overrrr !!
    scoreee.
    January 30th, 2010 at 06:16pm
  • kare_bear

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    DONSTER
    SUPPORT THEIR LOVE
    she makes your little boy happy!!!!
    goodness.
    but, i am happy they're back together adn happy.
    AND AND AND
    BOW CHICKA CHICKA WOW WOW CHICKA CHICKA WOW
    mike & kara sittin' in a tree, doin' something they shouldn't be!
    eheheheh.
    January 30th, 2010 at 05:32pm
  • livjackson

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    this made me a little sadddd!
    but it was amazinggg none the less!
    can not waittt for more!
    January 30th, 2010 at 03:56pm
  • tiffaannyyy

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    "Hey, that's my property right there, and I've missed them." - hmmmmm , I know how to solve that. Stop acting like a dick & get back together.

    "No, I missed you baby girl. I've missed you so much. Nothing is the same without you." slowly redeeming himself. But I'm still mad at tony.

    "Remember that when you don't want to be my boyfriend again. that made me want to cry :(

    SOOO,
    all in all .. I really dont appreciate Tony acting like this dickwad.
    he's slowly redeeming himself but I hope when they get back together he has to grovel like hell.
    but i enjoyed this latest chapter :)
    you are updating ridiculously fast !
    i enjoyy it!
    January 29th, 2010 at 05:05pm
  • Jessica;

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    Wow, captain douchenozzle is what I'll be calling him from now on.
    Although...he did redeem himself at the end but I'm still upset with him.

    "It's a party as if Tony Lucia would miss that." Jess laughed at my ignorance.
    I have yet to meet a hockey player who misses out on a party...ESPECIALLY after winning.

    I'm done with your shit right now. And I refuse to go support you if you're only going to treat me like shit.
    Damn straight, Molly!

    "If he's going to be a piece of shit, kick his ass halfway to Mars." Jordan scoffed at his girlfriend and dropped a kiss on top of her head.
    I am totally the voice of reason....and Jordan! <3

    I watched him with questioning eyes before I followed his gaze, seeing Jake stride up to Tony who had not one, but two girls on his lap.
    OH HELL FUCKING NO, HE DID NOT!

    I snorted at him, "no, it was coke and captain. Hey, you're a captain." I grinned at hm, pointing to the side of his chest where his C usually rested.
    Awwww, that's so cute.

    More of this Tony please?
    <333 you!
    January 29th, 2010 at 01:02am
  • shopaholic

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    i loved this chapter! and ur right a jealous tony is definitley super sexy! update soon?
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:24am