So it might look horrible that this is my first comment... ever on your stories. However, in my defense, I just now caught up on all that is Hell and Jinx. BTW-- I wish my nickname was Hell, but I'm not as kickass as she is. So... what's going to happen? I'm addicted, obviously since I spent about... 3 days nonstop reading your stories.
"I did not break the sprinkler" lol, oh the omens.
I loved it as usual :P how could I not? It's hard to side with Jinx or Shadows, who came from a very different family structure than she did. He's used to everything being done a certain way, and I feel like she doesn't understand that sometimes. While he might view her going out and passing out drunk as irresponsibility, she sees it as a deserved sort of thing. To be fair, she doesn't get to go out much. I love the major conflict and all the little conflicts because they have the potnetial to turn into a cluster-fuck lol.
While I'd love to pay you dollars for updates, I don't have any dollars. In fact, just two days ago I had a hundred dollars, but then my mom took it to pay for something lol. I want my money back.
Loved the update. Shadows was being a dick. And you did have a point when you said they were both difficult. Suprising to see this coming from Jinx and Shads instead of the other two. Well done. And don't worry about getting addicted to daytime television. I've been a stay at home mom and the shows are shit. <3
Sorry my comment sucks, I'm currently on two pain killers and my brain is dragging..lol.. Love you. Oh and at least this one didn't end with a cliffhanger. ;)
ha ha ha ha i love these stories, they all crack me up. I have suffered many a injury from laughing at the expanse of these characters, my most recent being now, i cracked the back of me haed open from throwing it back and laughing. Its great so keep em rolling.