I Won't See You Tonight... Unless I Can Find A Babysitter - Comments

  • hellheartless

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    You updated! Yay. I figured I should comment, to let you know that I have read it, and I loved it, and it was awesome, and it feels like it'll be forever before you update. So you should get on it. However, I will not force you because i haven't updated. haha.

    Good luck with picking the winners for your contest. by the way. lol. I was thinking of making one, but I have to pick men to have people right about and songs, and all this other shit. lol.

    But that's not the point of this comment. lol. I loved it, good job!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • punkstar102

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    update soon.. i love reading your stories, and Hell and Jinx.
    XD
    December 3rd, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • scratch_the_maven

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    “Hey, look at the giraffe! He’s going to sing you a song!” They quieted down a bit and waited. The expression on their faces clearly said it had better be a fucking masterpiece or they were going to go air raid siren on me again.

    I loved that part, lol. I was seriously trying to stifle a laugh while reading it. As much of a hassle as they are, evil babies like that turn out to be the best babies. I also loved when Hell told Kali to date a guy named Snake or something. Made me laugh because I know if I did that...my dad...well, "Snake" wouldn't live long.

    I love how I can feel the emotions and the frustrations even though I've never been in some of the situations before. I think that's the best thing about your writing, how much you convey the conflict and how real your characters feel.

    <3
    December 3rd, 2009 at 09:50pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    Poor Jinx.... children are the best form of contraception known to man ;)

    Love it hun, more soon? :)
    December 3rd, 2009 at 09:04pm
  • Every..Single..Beat

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    love it
    more more
    December 3rd, 2009 at 06:10pm
  • Abandon Ahead

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    Omg stick me with the demons!
    lmao nice update Cant wait for more!
    hopefully me and johnny sex ;D
    update soon
    December 3rd, 2009 at 03:47pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    OMG I love this story..I have been waiting forever for this one to come out...so worth the wait! Loved it hun! Can't wait for more!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 03:16pm
  • thegreatcalamity

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    An update??? Huzzah!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 03:02pm
  • bloodravyn

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    ahahaha!
    i'd say poor jinx and hell, but it's really poor brian and matt!
    loved!
    *susbcribes*
    December 3rd, 2009 at 09:12am
  • CharmedLuna

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    ha, jinx got cock blocked by babies

    it was a good update :]
    December 3rd, 2009 at 08:34am
  • rhie

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    love this story!!!!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 08:22am
  • Bamm!

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    Love it so far. update soon
    November 25th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • scratch_the_maven

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    YAY!!!!!!

    I literally started laughing out loud when they passed the babies off to Johnny and Ollie, lol. I can just picture the shocked, disgruntled look on Short-Shit's face, hahah.

    Damn O.o already 2 pages of comments. This has been up for several days hasn't it >.>
    Why didn't you tell me!!!! *throws a teddy bear at you* Oh yes, a teddy bear...because they've been known to attack humans while on hiking trips in the mountains....

    O.O

    Aaannnnnyway! I loved it. Update soon.
    November 13th, 2009 at 10:23pm
  • hellheartless

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    Damn. You already have a shit load of comments for this, you should update this one asap. Like for real. XP. Please? Now? If you ignore me on here there are other ways. Just remember that. XP

    Now, get to writing me a spectacular update where I kick brian's ass for bringing me to a pink house. Or peach, which ever. Peach, pink, it's pretty much the same. Now, please? See? I'm saying please. That rarely happens, and you know it. XP
    November 11th, 2009 at 07:36am
  • darkestnight

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    Okay, so I saw the email for this and just about flipped my shit. Excited? Moi? Yeah, quite a bit.
    First chapter was already brilliant, goodness the two babies are already growing on me. I love the way they're like hot potatoes. Fucking amazing. I'm piss-in-my-pants excited for more.
    November 9th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • Every..Single..Beat

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    'Being the supportive friend I am, I decided to stand outside and eat ice cream in front of her. I sure as hell wasn’t going to do it inside.'

    Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    more soon pls
    November 8th, 2009 at 07:31pm
  • Avenge_My_Death

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    FINALY!! I was begining to think that Jinx n Hell were getting tame in their old age....LMAO!! not really.
    Hell really should have just laid a smack down on Brian and that Bitch of a relator who had the balls enough to say the word nursery in Hells presence. lol.
    So happy to finaly b able to look for the update emails on this story again.
    Keep it up.
    November 8th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • Abandon Ahead

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    oh yes stick me and johnny with the psychotic parents kids..thats a fucking birth control right there.lol im sooo glad hell and jinx are back hopefully i don't do anything to get my ass kicked in this one lmao. but seriously i want to kick brians ass for bringing her to a peach colored house..are you serious!! whoever lives in a peach colored house is fuckin retarted. and i loved the taunting jinx while she's working out bit. i'd totally do that. anyways update as soon as u can (:
    November 7th, 2009 at 04:22pm
  • Abandon Ahead

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    oh yes stick me and johnny with the psychotic parents kids..thats a fucking birth control right there.lol im sooo glad hell and jinx are back hopefully i don't do anything to get my ass kicked in this one lmao. but seriously i want to kick brians ass for bringing her to a peach colored house..are you serious!! whoever lives in a peach colored house is fuckin retarted. and i loved the taunting jinx while she's working out bit. i'd totally do that. anyways update as soon as u can (:
    November 7th, 2009 at 04:20pm
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    Yay...I'm happy, excited, etc etc. O_o
    Update soon.
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:25am