Biting Seduction - Comments

I'm not crying. No. Nope. Nuh uh.

I love this story!
You should do a story about everyone's reactions after they die.

Your Avenged stuff is great, keep writing!

I finally finished this! It was great! Love how you ended it. Bravo. :)

Ok, HG, showed me this story and I'm only on Chapter 16 thus far. I had to stop though and tell you something.

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Just when Axl Rose screamed his welcomes to the jungle Brian thrust into me with an almost brutal groan, making my scream fill the room. Feeling his every inch I trailed my nails down his back, no doubt leaving scratches.

^^This is probably the hottest line I've read in a long fucking time! That's all, all I wanted to say,

*goes back to reading*

I teared up at the end. This is an amazing story<3
Your a fucking talented writer.

Wow... just wow. In one day I read this from chapter 1 to the end. It was like a good book, I couldn't put it down. The ending made me want to cry, I didn't want it to end like that. But it was still amazing!! I give you kudos on such brilliant work :)

Just read the full story and it was amazing!!! One my favourites even though I don't usually read this sort of thing. Please write a sequel would be awesome! Idk how you would do it but bring them back from the dead or something please!!! (: <3

it was a good story. and i cried at the end, i so didn't want them too. i was kinda hoping for a more happy ending. it was an amazing story though. I will be checking out your other story though. i hope it's just as good, but less death. just keep on writing.

awwwwwww why did you do that??? i didnt want them to die :'( SO PISSED AT YOU RIGHT NOW!

i read the whole thing...and i nearly cried @ the end to be honest but it was a really good story.

Huh... wow! Here I go and missed a couple of updates and next thing i know, you end the story ><"
I so wasn't expecting it to end so soon :S
But I gotta said that you did a great job :)
Loved it!

so hmm. how exactly does one say I love you & what you do & am also so proud of you without sounding cheesy and repeting oneself yet again? any ideas? no? nothing? YEAH I DO FEEL LIKE REPETING MYSELF ANYWAY SO ILL JUST GO EAT SOME CAKE NOW (gotta stretch my belly for tomorrow right?)

oh wait, I actually had something to say! I love you & I love how that ended & it was kinda the perfect way to end it & so YOU too ya know & Im so prouf of you for sticking with this even when sometimes you didnt feel like it *hugtackle*

This has to be one of my fav stories on mibba! Great job!
I loved it!!....even though am sad that its over! :'(
Great job though! =)

That ending made no sense at all.

SO. CONFUSED.

oh god i'm vrying right now! :) that was such an ending, i just can't believe that happened. it was kind of obvious but still. good storie i loved it

sorry my idea is expanding ><

they like try to let them know that they are there but the guys don't know it's actually them

This story was amazing! I'm so sad it's over!
I got this creepy idea for a squel that like all the other guys are greiving and zoe and brian actuall haunt the house together O_o sorry random idea =)

oh no! im so upset this story is over :( However, the ending was amazing, just like the rest of the story! You're a really great writer! <3

That was so amazing.
I cried through the last two chapters.
I feel like a sap.
I don't even usually read ones when the guys aren't regular people but youu changed me.
Haha. Good Job!