Wow, this story was incredible. Amusing, lovely, sexy, heart-wrenching and sad. But it ended beautifully. It kind of reminds me of the Smiths song, "To die by your side, well the pleasure, the privilege is mine" Beautiful, your an excellent writer dollface :) <3
I'm such a dumbass. I've made so much mistakes in the comment up there. Never mind, everyone knows I'm crazy, now they're bound to admit that I am dumb as well - as I've been telling people since I got to highschool ^^
OH-MY-FUCKING-GOD. I should hate you now, right? You just let Brian die, right? You just did let die his eternal love, right? RIGHT?!
Nonetheless...
I <3 U
Because the ending, the whole fucking story... JC (this is not for Jesus, but for JOHNNY Christ, being the bass god, you know) I can't even find words for it!
I've already read some crap here, I've read many good as well as great stories here, I've read a bunch of stories that really caught me by heart... and this, this is definitely one of them.
<3 U.
NOW LET'S THROW THE FUCKIN' COFFIN PARTY TO CELEBRATE YOUR MASTERPIECE!!! YAY FOR YOU HUN ^^
P.S.: WIth Me?! WITH ME?!? I love you even more. One of my favs among all of the crazily madly stuff Sum 41 ever wrote. Gee I love you so much that maybe I should rethink if I am still straight or not.
Kay, just kidding. You can come back from under your bed and you don't even have to change your name and move to some little forgotten village in India, I'm not after you <3 <3
.....................did you just end the story with death AND HAPPY ENDING? Wow I love you so much right now XDDDDDD Uh, wow. That was really amazing. So many good sentences in the chapter and so many awesome describes and I love your mind and AWW MY LITTLE FINN HAS FINISHED A FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! <333333333333 That was really good. And I so love Sum41 at the end! And I love you and I can't believe it is over and cannot believe it's been so long since you started and YOU KILLED THEM YAY. Did I make any sense? Oh well, who cares. LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY <3
So they ARE going to die? SHOULD I DO THE HAPPY DANCE?! SHOULD I?! SHOULD I SEND A BRANDON BOYD YOUR WAY SO IT WOULD DISTRACT KYLE AND YOU COULD WRITE THE NEXT PART?! OH! You know what would be a perfect ending? Zoe dying and Brian making it through. YEAH THAT'LL BE PERFECT!! 'Cause then Zoe will become just one of his failing bonds and he would go on with his endlessly miserable lonely life and then this all thing could happen again like a million more times! :D ....but I cannot wait to see what YOU come up with! XD CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE <3
I'm confused. In chapter 34 brian gets the bond too at the end and I was expecting the next chapters would be them going through pain, but it's just them getting married. Isn't she supposed to be hurt still. Please explain because either you screwed up on the chapters or im retarded.=]
Location: in ma head Time: just finished readin that last chapter, approx noon-ish
me: hmmm myself: I KNOW. me: this kinda.. myself: I KNOW, I KNOW I KNOOOOOW. this kinda sucks in all the best possible ways. or rocks in all the suckiest ways. me: yeah EXACTLY & its kinda like I wanna hate her. mysefl: but at the same time love her. me: I KNOOOW. so weird. myself: thats what she does though. me: I KNOW, like all the friggin time with this BS. myself: yeah. *sigh* me: so let's just go comment somethin stupid eh? myself: yeah. its not like we could describe how much we like it or detail out every single little thing we like bout it, and the only thing we dislike is that its probably going to end soon, so.. me: yeah. let's just go & act like arses. myself: LETS. ....do you smell pie?