hey loser just got done reading your newest chapters and i think there GREAT! lol now hurry up with the next ones bc i wanna read more lol alright well keep up the good work...IMY
Yay you updated again! As usual I loved the last chapter. Vanessa's job sounds interesting. I loved the "gossip girls" line. Made me laugh. I think Cynthia was upset for a moment when Vanessa mentioned meeting the White Dragoness because she never had the honor to meet the dragon herself. But that's just what I think.
Ooh, what a good update! I'm curious about the control room. Though I can't remember if you've mentioned before. Guess that gives me an excuse to re-read the story! Surprised that Laci would suddenly do a 180 and help out Vanessa. Hope she stays that way. I do have a little criticism. Make sure you go through everything before you submit to check for any spelling or grammar mistakes. And also make sure that everything that needs to be capitalized, is.
Chapter 7: I liked the description of the cavern with all the diamonds. Poor Vanessa having to go through her own Fear Factor at a young age. No wonder she’s the way she is. I liked the introduction to more dragons and a group of other servant women. The plot is becoming more interesting.
Chapter 8: Ah, so the dragons do have names! Where did you get the male dragon’s name from? Marie certainly doesn’t have any confidence in her husband’s plan. I wonder why they need Vanessa.
Wow, that woman in charge sure is a bitch. I liked what Vanessa did to her hair. Rainbow knife to the rescue! Ha-ha! I’m glad at least a couple of people were willing to help her. She needs a good night’s sleep. Update soon!
Your story is not horrid at all. I happen to find it quite interesting. It must be terrible for Vanessa to go from one bad situation to another. Hopefully she can finally catch a break.