Gravity - Comments

Oh god. I can't believe she's pregnant. It's like one bad thing after another for her.
Can't wait for more. (:

uh-oh. she's prego. lol. that's what we said when my cuz got pregnant. interested to see how jake handles it. oh and you got tix for a blackhawks game? sweet! good luck with patrick! lol

This is a really good chapter!

I don't like that she got pregnant...

But I am looking foreward to the way she deals with the pregnancy.

Update soon please!

haha good authors let their storiesd take ona mind of their own.. i love reading in autrhtos notes that a character is annoying them or they don't knwo how this happeend :)

signs of greatness ^^

goo job lovie.. me lieks :)

awesome story! you write very well. i wait all the time to hear about charlotte browning! i think it's great that you like hockey. so do i. pens&sens are my favourites.

WHAT!!!!!!!! way to make it more dramatic, i kinda like it though, it will be something they have to work though that will make them closer, i hope.....

OH MY LANTA!!!! SHE IS PREGGO!!! That was so unexpected I mean I was beyond shocked but I loved it! I mean I don't love that she's pregnant I love the twist and the drama and very clever idea using Alice to see into the future. Man I can't wait to see what happens but great update!

hmm if its not one thing, its another...
poor jacob n charlotte... this doesnt seem to b gettin ne easier for them =P
update soon =]

Awwwww crap, she's pregnant?!?!?! Damn. Good update, more soon?
Oh, and I wish you luck with Patrick Kane haha

This was a really good chapter! I hope she doesn't have AIDS because well it would not only eventually kill her but ruin her life. I mean with her skating she would have to be overly careful because if she cut herself with her skate or fell and got a scrape and blood got on the ice and the person cleaning it up had an open cut....ya just a ton of precautions with AIDS. It was a really good twist in the story and I love how you keep the story interesting
Just one grammar thing. In this part of the story-

knowing that Charlotte would be alot more happier...

It is grammatically incorrect to say more happier you can be much happier but the more is already implied in happier because more happy is happier. And that was the only grammar thing I saw but I loved the chapter.

lol :P
great updateex

i really hope she dosent have AIDS that would not be cool, and then Jacob and her couldnt have little wolfs running around, much later of course lol.

and the thing about Crosby, i actually got excited because i thought you where being for real i would love it if he died i do not like him one bit, him or the penguins, sorry im a die hard Red Wings fan lol

she better not have aids.
or i'll fucking go in the story and hunt down those bastards myself.

harsh dad..sorry hun :( *hugs*

oic.. now we knwo why she was stuck.. and yay homeness!!

sigh..i'm sure the cullens will smell the AIDS before the docotros find it ehh?? :(

aww i hope she doesnt get aids..... that would kill the story 4 me >.<

updates soon plz!! =D

thats a serious event. u dont joke about Sid the kid dying. Its not cool. ur reaction was understandable

omgomgomg! i hope she doesn't have AIDS! hey told you crosby died? wow. that would've scared the shit out of me! lolz. more soon plz!

I think if Charlotte got AIDS, Jacob would legit kill someone. I hope she doesn't! That would just be terrible. *sigh*
I loved this chapter/update.
And your dad is so mean! ):
more soon!

Amazing!
You better not give her AIDS!!!!
I think that will make some people upset!

Namely me!

Anyway, update soon please!

Merry Christmas, Sam Shadows.

yay! first comment on this chapter :D

It was good, i have she doesn't have AIDS(oops might've spoiled it for somebody)

Sorry!