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  • LeannaLyssRomie!

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    You cant just leave it there! lol. I really like this story, but i really really really want to know what her dad was talking about!!!! :D
    Update soon?
    December 20th, 2009 at 06:52am
  • song.of.the.stars

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    cliffhanger....hmmmmm i wonder what could have happened!
    i really like the whole tattoo part, that was sweet and i do agree with the person above me about the week in the hospital thing cause i had knee surgery and i didnt even have to stay a day in the hospital and the only person i know who had to stay so long in a hospital was a friends grandma who had MERSA....
    but then again maybe there is something tramatic with char's injuries, but that is just being picky and i really do love this story and cant wait for another update!
    December 16th, 2009 at 03:16pm
  • Crazysabby

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    oh yeah... leave me on a cliffhangee...r fiiiineeeeee -.-

    hmm a week in the hopital fr a broekn arm/ knock out meds... not very realistic.. ro am i forgettign an injury?? :(

    good boy sam AWWWWWWWWW TATOOSSS

    WATS WROOONGNGGGGGG or did they nto find the rapers or soemthign.. urgg -.-
    December 16th, 2009 at 08:11am
  • sTeLLaRxFRESH

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    Aww Jake's getting her named tattoed over his heart..that's so cute.
    Charr's a drugged up no meds..LOL
    I wonder what's wrong?
    Nice update.
    December 15th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • topless

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    Loveee the layout 'n everything.
    I love your writing. :)
    && CLIFFHANGER!
    Dun dun dunn.

    Haha, tattoos. xD
    December 14th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • Crazed4Life

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    Update soon.
    I love it.
    December 13th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Evil cliffhanger!!! Oh lord.
    The tattoo conversation was adorable. I loved that.
    More sooooon!
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • TheTigersBride.

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    Cliffhanger??
    How could you do this to us! (and Jacob)?????

    Update, update, update!!!!!
    December 12th, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • summer time.

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    WHAAAAAAAAAT?!
    why cliffhanger!? D:
    you must update fast, or i'll die. aha!
    [i believe her mother's back. :o]
    December 12th, 2009 at 09:04pm
  • Much.Betterr

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    Oh gosh cliffhanger!!!!

    Love it plz update soon!
    December 12th, 2009 at 08:50pm
  • cmhsharkgrl19

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    uh-oh! "big problem" never good. more soon plz! luv it!
    December 12th, 2009 at 06:29pm
  • chiggachiggasax!

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    I really enjoy your story. :D I have already subscribed. You're an excellent writer who knows how to leave someone hanging!
    December 12th, 2009 at 03:05pm
  • Becka Vengeance

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    I.love.this.story. It's so well written, the way the characters thoughts flow and mesh is amazing. I just read all 17 chapters in like half an hour. Loveeeee it, more soon?
    December 12th, 2009 at 09:39am
  • Synful Skittles

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    You are an evil evil person for leaving me hanging!!!!!!!! What happened????????
    December 12th, 2009 at 07:14am
  • debzxxx

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    i Love this story :)
    Great chapter :D
    Keep goinggx
    December 12th, 2009 at 05:33am
  • xDead.by.Dawnx

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    haha lemme guess... shes preggers??
    that would soo suck >.>

    keep the updates comin'!!
    December 12th, 2009 at 05:30am
  • solovely;

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    Update, please. That last chapter has me guessing.
    December 12th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • ilovepatkirch

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    Ahhh!
    Don't leave me hangin'! Haha
    More soon!?:)
    December 12th, 2009 at 04:48am
  • swell

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    Dude, you can't just write an amazing chapter and then leave a cliffhanger!
    As always, you've written an awesome chapter. I liked how Charlotte was still a little weary of Jake touching her, instead of being perfectly okay with it. Keep on writing!
    December 12th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • crowning.

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    Omy!! Cliffhanger!!
    December 12th, 2009 at 04:34am