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  • bluesbabyx3

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    UPDATE PLEASE!!
    April 10th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • Hockey_fan74

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    I want more! Update?
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • greenglitter

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    WAHHHH THAT'S IT?? Forever stuck at cliffhangers... But I really loved this, so just for the record...
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:21am
  • BluesFan74

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    Oh my goshhh I stumbled on to this story and fell in love. Update soon (:
    April 14th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • sydneywhite93

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    Love the story...Can't wait for a new update!!!!!!
    August 29th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • headintheclouds

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    I feel bad for TJ, but he kinda did bring this on himself. Poor Danielle, tho. She doesn't need this.
    Can't wait for more!!
    August 5th, 2010 at 01:06pm
  • c is for carly.

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    oh dear god.
    this chapter was heart-wrenching.
    and i really loved tj and danielle together.
    please please please update soon!
    July 30th, 2010 at 06:14am
  • mully17

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    Awww Poor TJ and Danielle!!!! Get them back together
    July 28th, 2010 at 02:19am
  • magznmo

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    cant wait til you update again
    July 27th, 2010 at 06:54pm
  • SomethingJack6608

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    That chapter nearly broke my heart..
    July 27th, 2010 at 04:43pm
  • Chickydee6

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    WHAT?!?!?!
    Ok, I'm still half asleep, but I'm trying to get ready for school and I'm about to cry.
    She's an idiot and Kaner should have his balls cut off for making my TJ cry.
    Other than that, I'm so pumped that you updated.
    More soon please :)
    July 27th, 2010 at 01:59pm
  • Chickydee6

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    lacey...update this, would you?
    May 3rd, 2010 at 02:58am
  • penschick8771

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    i really like this story and i hope you update soon : )
    keep up the great work : )
    April 27th, 2010 at 04:08am
  • Blues_Jukkes

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    this is getting intense, but i love it!

    i read it all in one day :)

    More chapters, please.
    March 8th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • I've got hope.

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    Well hello. Long time no talk :O!

    Haha. I haven't read this [well I guess it was the Prequel..] for months, but I got around to reading it again today. THEN, I saw there's a sequel, so I read that today.

    And NOW, I'm all caught up on the story. Yesss! Aha.

    This is pretty intense...relly awesome actually.

    Anyways, I'm still loving this...and still like Jon the most :-# :D

    Keep up the good work (Y)
    February 28th, 2010 at 02:52am
  • bubble332

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    oooh...please update!!
    February 15th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • PensRock

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    Patrick’s smirk formed on the corners of his lips as he leaned against his front door and wiped at his sweaty forehead with the back of his hand. He knew exactly what the three of them were thinking. He wasn’t about to let them know that he was, in fact, working out. - - You little weasel Patrick.

    “Yah well it’s either she wakes up a little pissed off or she wakes up and has a dead hotshot hockey player to deal with. The choice is yours.” - - Go Teej! Put the little fucker (who I happen to love also) in his place. LOL

    “I don't care if she dumped my ass or not. Even if she were free for the taking I would bend over backward to make sure that you didn't get your filthy hands on her.” - - Love it when TJ protects her like this!

    I love that she woke up and called for TJ. She loves him!!!!!

    “You think I'm angry now?” He questioned with a laugh. “You haven’t seen anything yet. I’ll take you out if you fuck with me again.” Dear Teej: That's crazy sexy.

    Thanks for the update Lacey. You know I need more. To be specific, I need her to wake up and realize she could never be happy without her Teej. I'm just sayin.
    February 14th, 2010 at 09:13pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    agh...patrick is such a liar...can't wait for the next update!
    February 14th, 2010 at 08:41am
  • Taylor;

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    I know everyone is hating on Patty K. but, I can't help but respect the fact that he didn't sleep with her.
    Doesn't mean he doesn't deserve a good punch to the gut but still, kept it in his pants.

    TJ needs to get it together though.
    February 14th, 2010 at 12:31am
  • mully17

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    Awwww Patrick is an ass in this chapter!!

    Tj is a sweetie tho, I love it
    February 13th, 2010 at 10:31pm