The end is kinda.. bittersweet. Finall they were getting somewhere and then everything had to take a drastic turn! :/ Makes the sequel more interesting though.. ^^
Dear, Frangipani, This.... this is me right now: ;-; You've reduced me to utter sadness at their depature and now I wanna update my story (partially because I now have two comments :3). I shall get right on to reading the sequel, and then updating my story. xD Sincerely, M. Oreo P.S. I'M SO SAD!!!! D: And, yet, excited for the sequel now. x3 P.P.S.(<--I think that's right...) I'm in glass case of emotion!!! P.P.P.S.(Still not sure. XD) If you know what movie that's from, you're my favorite person. :D
XD I just got my internet back, that was a apain in the ass but this is amazing oh my god im going straight to the sequel.... Ahhhhhh excitinggg :) Your amazing !!!!!!!!! XD
I just got all caught up and...... YOU NEED TO FRIGGIN' UPDATE!!! Dx You can even leave a cliffhanger if that means you'll put up the sequel really soon, too! :P Me & Thee and Sugar & Spice have both inspired me to write my own Harry Potter (well, more like the Marauders) fic. I don't think I even would've started reading HP fan-fictions if it weren't for those two stories! XD But anyway, I'm basically in love with your writing style and am massively excited for the sequel (you have no idea, I'm literally bouncing as I type this and it's rather difficult to type while doing so I hope you know). I'm keeping my eyes peeled for the update and sequel. :3
I love this story, I really really do. So I just finished reading chapter 28 and I was thinking "noooooo! why did the skank have to dance her way in? why?!" well I know why, the lovely word that keeps the world spinning, drama.
i just realized her brother tom is portrayed by damon from vampire diaries (i fail to know their real names) i found that funny :) not a bad funny though, a good funny :D
An idea to wrap this stroy up - 'Daddy dearest' dies, rosie has a natural bawling fit, and sirius saves the day by comforting her, and that's where they confess everything, and get together. Classic ending. :p
Oh wow, brilliant writer you are! Glad to here you've left Quizilla; I have one, but it sucks balls. Hehe(: It's so great how I can relate to Rosie. She seems like a tortured character. Funny 'cuz I've only read the first chapter, but I'll get to reading the whole of it! Keep writing, man, it's awesome! (:
I really love this story. It's so well written, you're writing style, as I said before, is so like mine. Which I do enjoy, because there are people on this site who don't seem to like punctuation and spaces. LOL. I hope you update soon, and I also hope that you update Me and Thee, soon as well, I am dying over here!