This first chapter was so adorable. I loved how you introduced each character. They were all so vivid and different. Great writing as well, and style. =]. Stevvie seems very interesting. Can't wait to hear more about her and Nick. =].
Wowww! I really really loved this chapter! I love how you set up everybody's personalities and put in like background info for most of them too. That conversation was funny. Haha. (: Great first chapter!