Freedom-Less - Comments

Brilliant chapter.
It did seem like Zachy would cheat on her, perhaps in his mind he sees it is fair now since Angie is 'cheating'.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

ahh you can't leave it there!!!
well...i guess you can but it's not fair!
haha i'm so happy i found this story it's really good :) i can't wait to see what happens next. I do have to say the Zack's a bit of a butt head and I love Matt for being so caring towards her <33
i hope their relationship last for a while and Zack see's what he lost when they go back to school!
stupid sexy green eyed man lol.

can't wait for the next update hun
amazing job :)

This just gets better and better and better and better! I love matt!!!!!!

this story is really good so far :]

I haven't read the whole story yet I only finished chapter three but i love when she talks about "smug, dimpled grin off his face" because it reminds me of Matt's cute dimples. I just want to poke them repeatedly. He has like the cutest dimples ever!!!!

hehe, what a cute chapter :3
yeah, i agree with avengedsevenfoldlver...i've had a feeling zacky would cheat on her ever since he found out she was "dating" matt. that would suck though. :(
anywho, great chapter! excited to see what's in store for their little...date. hahah.

I think zacky's cheating on her! if he is he's such a jerk. but hey! her and matt make a good couple lol

This is so great so far. I can't wait to read more.

Wow my comment seems really pathetic after x.Kris.x

This is so great so far. I can't wait to read more.

Wow my comment seems really pathetic after x.Kris.x

Okay, so...wow. I had so many updates to catch up on. I'm so sorry. I promise to leave a much better comment next time. Was that a hint to update?...Maybe...

Yay Johnny is Zacky's friend! Haha! That makes me happy. Zacky deserves some friends, especially since our lovely lady lead has such amazing ones already. May Jimmy rest in peace, and Leana find peace...

That just felt appropriate to say. But I'm glad that you've decided to keep writing, especially with this, keeping their fun-loving personality and spirit. Michelle and Brian just crack me up though. You're so funny, depicting them as that stereotypical high school couple. But they kind of seem like it though, don't they? I have to say, your characters are always spot on. Even if I don't necessarily agree with everything they do, you somehow create such real personas that it makes everything just seem like reality. Well done.

Oh la la, temptations, eh? I commend Angeline. What woman can resist Shad's charms dude? Seriously? The sexual tension you've woven into the story doesn't help either. You've done that effortlessly, by the way. I love how strongly I feel her emotions...and reactions *cough cough* That aside, I'm curious to see where you're going with this. Update soon! I need more Zacky in my life <3

wow, if my boyfriend spontaneously gave me 500 dollars to shop, i would not turn it down XD
great chapters! can't wait to see what happens at the party... ;)

I love this story so much. You have to post another chapter soon. Brilliant tension you have between your characters.

I have a feeling their gunna be gettin it on sometime in the story! hahaha. its gonna interesting

:O my new fav story! haha update when you can! i absolutly[?] love this story lol

quite an interesting chapter...i wonder what zack's proposal will be. great chapter! :)

Great update as always :) your writing never disappoints!

awwww, poor angie
but i sense a growing relationship between her and sanders... ;D

not only is this plot great, you are also a fabulous writer! that's not common with a7x fanfiction :]

haha the last sentence is gold!!! great update!

holy shit this is good!!! this plot is amaaaaaaaaaaaazingggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!