She Will Love You Through Your Demise - Comments

  • edtheyran

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    -new reader!-
    I absolutely love this! I think it's the best Brian Haner story out there! (:
    Update soon?
    <3
    July 4th, 2010 at 06:20pm
  • Lost Cause

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    Did I really miss two updates? I'm so sorry, Lindsay...I can't believe I missed two of your amazing updates. And yes, they were both absolutely amazing. I honestly want to hug both Kate and Brian, even if I think Brian needed some sense knocked into him.

    I keep trying to imagine how they're first meeting will go, and I just can't. I know it's going to be epic though, that's for sure. I can't wait for your next update, hun!
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:07am
  • Zombieshoww

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    I really love this story. I love the way you make me feel when describing their feelings, mostly Brian's.

    Gosh, this story is really sad! I don't even care if it was short! When are you going to make them make up and be all crazy in love? I love this story!!!!!

    I love you twin!!!!! PS Sorry I haven't been able to talk to you lately :( My cable got shut off (LAME!) and now I am at my sister's house.
    May 29th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • FuckNo

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    I think she's overreacting and needs to go back to Brian.
    May 29th, 2010 at 06:27am
  • JimmySullivan

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    omg was that kate??? i am soo wanting more now :o
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    oh man. talk about getting your ass kicked. poor brian... well i guess he deserves it. but this is amazing. it was one of your best yet.

    i hope brian and kate start to talk soon!
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:52am
  • IvySaint

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    damn,that chapter just leaves me wanting more! so update some more,lol!
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:41am
  • BlackAshes

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    you're right, that was friggen' intense. that last message from kate? brutal. i felt like flinching for brian, dude. and jimmy! jimmy was such a parent and so un-jimmy-like. it was great! but i thin my favourite part was johnny's message. that just cracked me upp. at first, i thought it was kate but then obvi, i realized it was good ol' drunk jc. i could picture it so clearly in my head, dude lol.

    so far, i think that this has been my favourite chapter by far. it was really, really well-written (as always) and very real (again, as always). i really hope to see brian and kate actually conversing face to face sometime soon. great update, sugar! can't wait for moreeeeeeee!

    <333
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:38am
  • JimmySullivan

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    aw....i want to cry now. poor thing. i wish theyd fix things. :/
    May 14th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    Aww this chapter was so heartbreaking. it is hard to see her come apart at the seams. and it was wonderful even if you weren't happy with it.

    i'm going to kill Brian if he doesn't start to make effort soon.

    but over all a lovely chapter... and yes i know my turn... im so over due. sorry!
    May 13th, 2010 at 04:26am
  • Zombieshoww

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    BUT WHYYYY!?!?!
    I feel so bad for her!
    I'll comfort her, screw Brian baby! I'm your new man :P:P

    I had a "detailorgasm" twin.
    I looooved this chapter!!!!!! Even though it was so sad, I felt as if I was there.
    You are such a fantabulous writerrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 13th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • BlackAshes

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    You're amazing at writing the most intriguing last lines. That line - no matter how simple - made me go, 'awhhhh man!' 'cause I know that your writing muse goes away sometimes, so I dunno how long we'll have to wait for the next one.

    SHE'S FINALLY COMING APART! WOOO! How much longer 'til she gets with Brian and they get their groove on?

    The part where she went to Jimmy made me happy. 'Cause she was showing emotion, you know? And the fact that he was shirtless was quite a nice mental image =D

    You're doing a great job with the pace for this story, Bubbles. I love it! I love it! I love it!
    May 13th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • Lost Cause

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    Lindsay, hun, I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to read this amazing story.

    I absolutely love it so far! I like being able to see into Brian's head and know what he's going through. I can't believe he locked himself away for so long, and I was so happy when Zacky finally broke in. I can't wait for Brian to finally pull himself together, and to see what Kate thinks about everything.

    I love this story! Once again, Linds, you have written an addictive story XD
    April 13th, 2010 at 12:26am
  • iwasthere

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    I love this! It's so well written, every word I read intrigue me more.
    I really like that this is in Brian's P.O.V. not many stories focus on the main guy character.
    March 17th, 2010 at 04:58pm
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    This story is truly amazing Lindsay. It is wonderful to really see the inside of Brian's mind and what he is going through. So inspiring. BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
    March 15th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • trishahhh

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    i really like the story and how deep the emotions are... but im dying to know what's making the emotions deep.... can't wait for an update.... your very talented...
    March 15th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • BlackAshes

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    WTF IS WRONG WITH PEOPLE! 6O SUBZIES AND ONLY 15 COMMENTS! MOST OF THEM FROM ME!? WTF? STUPIDDDDD. C'EST TRES STUPIDE. COMMENT EST-IL POSSIBLE?!!!!
    March 15th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • BlackAshes

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    I'm so proud of you. You're doing such an awesome job with this story so far. I mean, everything I read, it seems to be so heartfelt. Not just the writing, but Brian's emotions... They seem so real? I'm not sure if what i just said makes any sense, but.. You know. I love how woozy my stomach gets when he thinks about Kate and all her smiles. And just, his feelings for her in general. I really do hope the two of them end up together, but I'm sure that I'll probably change my mind in the next couple of chapters when Jimmers comes in.

    I can't wait for more, bubba! Looooooooooovvvvvvved it!

    Obviously.

    Oh and btw - Zacky + Brian bromance? Gah. I love it. I want more! More, more! xx
    March 14th, 2010 at 10:50pm
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    Very good.
    I feel sorry for him but want to hit him equally.. why did he have to go to heathers house?!??!
    March 14th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    soo freaking amazing :D

    more soon please ^_^
    March 12th, 2010 at 07:16pm