Can't You Help Me as I'm Starting to Burn? - Comments

gah! I loved this story.

I'm so sad to see it end but it was a goregeous end to a brilliant story. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and will definitely be sticking around to see a sequel. I absolutely loved it.

WOOO SEQUAL!!!! better psot the link here so we can find it XD

awww YAY i was hoping it's be happy XD lol :) ^^...

sigh* only ash *shakes head* would put off kissing, at a time liek that, to ask for a dog...

BHAHAHAHAH

AWEEEEEE.
AWE.
AWE.
AWE <3
I have tears in my eyes, seriously.
It was soooooooooooo cute! <3333
Amazing ending ^_^ It made me giggle.
SEQUEL <333
And just out of curiosity, what kind of dog are they going to get? :D

*standing ovation*

I loved it, very well written, and keep me wanting more all the way until the end

Aww amazing ending! (:
I was about to be sad because its over but your doing a sequel so YAY! Haha.
<333

Aww, i can't believe its over TT__TT But i sooo loved it and i'm really glad they got back together, the ending was so cute <3

They're soo amazing!! I loved every minute of it!!!! and I can't wait for the sequel!!! :D!!

I love this story.
I cant wait for the sequel.
Please hurry in putting it up?!?!?!?!

Ahhh oh my god it ended! That was the sweetest, most adorable chapter ever.
I. love. this. story.
And I can't wait for the sequel!! :D

that was an adorable end to an adorable story! I can't wait for the sequel!

YES! They're back together, Nate is rich, and they have a dog!
I love happy endings.

Can we get a dog?

This was a really well written story. I can't wait for the sequel. Good luck on your exams though!!!

OMG!!! That was so good!!! I love hat they are back together!!!!! AWWWWW that was so sweet!! I would die if a guy did that for me!!!! I know he cheated but he really didn't know what wasn't ash!!! We all make mistakes!! I can't wait for the next one!!! This story was amazing!!! Good job!!!

Noooo!!!!
Not the enddddddd!!!
Hmph!
Oh well!
It was a great ending and I can't wait till the sequel. xp

...wow

Nuu! They have to get back together!! D:
I got teary T_T
Nooooo, only one more!
Does it have to end? it's so good!
;___;

I cried.
I CRIED.
HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME??!?!!???
...Well....Nate and Ash... D':
-Snivels and Wipes Nose On Sleeve-
PUT THEM BACK TOGETHER, OR I'LL HIT YOU WITH A DILDO,
LIKE I'VE HIT SOME MANY OTHER PEOPLE WITH...>.>
-Bawls-
........
And only one more chapter!?!?!??
-Starts Crying Again-

OMG i need to read more it can't end like this i am dying from the cliff hanger
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!