The Essence of Sin - Comments

You got me good with the April Fools chapter

okay, so seriously....
not....
cool man....
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you did NOT seriously just do that to us!! AH!!!
haha your awesome in a mean way :P

I cannot wait for you to update again!!!!!! You left us hanging. Ahhh!!!!! I have no idea why everyone is acting so strange, and its killing me! I'm so obsessed with this story, it's not even funny!
Update soon please! You Rock:)

i have read a lot of stories in my time, and i have to say this is the best one i have read so far!
if you only need three words to describe how you feel then this story has me obsessed. Your writing allows me to know and feel the characters, and i have fallen madly inlove with Kara. Dont lose hope on this story yet! its by far the best!

i think i know why shauns upset, and im probably the only one who thinks this but i never liked that she and caleb got together, i thought he was to possessive :x oh well.
thank you for posting the breakup seen so we all may stop making up our own ideas in our head =]

I finally caught up on the million and a half updates that you posted while I was too busy to check my email, and now You're leaving me with a cliffhanger. TT.TT I hope that you find the time to update again soon. I forgot just how much I love this story.

P.S. I think I have a little bit of an idea of what's going on. XD

Ahhh I'm SO SO SO sorry, you guys! I'm seriously beating myself up right now. =(

I knew I wasn't dillusional!! Haha, I would've re-read that entire story for that break-up scene. Not that I wanted them to break up. I was very much against it. It hurt me to read it. I just didn't like people referring back to it when I didn't know what they were talking about :).

oh...Oh...OH!!!!!!
I GET IT NOW!!!!!!
......so I'm not as stupid as I thought...puh, good to know that...I really felt like a bad reader...

i want to know the plan! i want to know why shaun is freaking out! you need to write more, and wait she isnt dating him anymore? whats going on??? that part confused me.
please update sooooooon!!

Noooo!!!!! You can't leave me hanging like this its killing me! What happened?

Aaah. I don't want you to "not update in a while". Nikki wants update now! Nikki needs update now! Nikki mad.....haha jk. But please don't forget about this story. I must know: WHY IS EVERYONE ACTING SO FRIGGIN WEIRD!!!

NOOOOOOOOO
So this story's on hold for now? Damn....
Everything you write is so amazing. I still don't get how someone can make me become so addicted. You're an otherworldly genius ;P
I'm impressed.
This story stuns me every time with its wonderful twists and turns.

....though I feel like a bad reader...
Firstly, I didn't recognize that TWO years had already passed.
And secondly, I can't remember Kara breaking up with Caleb

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I nearly cried when Jared was shot..really...

AND HOW COME I DIDN'T RECOGNIZE THAT KARA ALREADY TURNED EIGHTEEN!!!!!!

Since the very beginning, I always had this odd feeling that there'll be something between Jared and his little princess...

Me love love love's.
I read this story on Quizilla and I thought it was awesome, and here I am reading it again.. and I still think it's awesome! Pleasee write more.. I wanna see Jared and Kara spend more time together (:

I truly hope the update doesn't take too long, because I'm definitely hooked :) Again, I had read this on Quizilla so I'm eager to see what Shaun is planning, and I'm excited to see what happens with Jared and Kara :)

I literally scramed out "NNOOOO" to my computer when the chapter ended where jared got shot
I love jared and im glad you have not killed him off...yet (hopefully never)

these chapters have been so intense, I love it!

Oh my geez. I CRIED. Now I feel like a big baby :( *pout*

I love love love love this so much-i was late to a meeting so i could finish reading the update lol
You are a wonderful writer-definitely have me hooked. :)