The Essence of Sin - Comments

I love it!!!! Best EVER!!!!

SOPHIE!!!!!!

I'll say it in one sentence..to make it MUCH shorter ;)

I ABSOLUTELY ADORED EVERY SINGLE LITTLE THING ABOUT CHAPTER 18!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HELL. YES.
things are getting good, and you're almost up to the spot where you left off!
I'm so excited for new chapters.
Gahhh :P I love Jared.
and that's saying a lot because I loved Caleb too, a LOT.

I love this! I swear, its over-running my life.

I NEVER expected them to sleep with each other
..not all of a sudden at least
lol

I LOVE THIS

OMG WHO IS NATE?!?!?!?!?!
..oh well, guess I'll find out for myself soon anyway...haha

But really, this story has so many turns...IT'S F*CKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If you keep updating at this rate I'll have a hard time leaving the computer during break. XD I hope that you have fun at you friend's place.

Oh! Thank you! Sorry I'm going really fast to update haha... The Fort McNair chapters are my favorite and I'm a bit overexcited over here.... New chapter up! Enjoy! This is the last update for the night--I'm off to a friend's house now. =]

I think you accidently titles two different chapters as 26...=3 Jared's always been on of my favorite characters in this story.

this is the BEST story i have ever read!!!! its my absolute favorite!!!! iv read a ton of stories on here and on quizilla and i have NEVER EVER found a better one!!!!!
great job! i cannot wait for an update!!!!

Yay! I'm so happy that its only halfway done and not about to end
I don't think Kara should ever forgive nate (well...maybe forgive him since he got them out of jail only after he put them in... but she belongs with Caleb)

Please update again soon and feed this addiction =D

Rawr! (<--I've always wanted to say that.) Thanks for being so awesome and updating.

I was thinking of Kara's relationships with the boys, and it made me think of a quote from Victor Hugo's "Les Miserables." I just wish that I could find it! Anyway, it was about how Jean Valjean loved Cosette, his adopted daughter, as a mother, a lover, a daughter, and a sister because he had never had anyone to take those positions in his life. That's how I think the guys feel about Kara.

Don't worry about it ending, guys! I'm not even half way through the story right now. I think I'm closer to having only a quarter of it done and posted on Mibba. =] There's a LOT more coming. (And fyi, if I'm at the end of the story, I write THE END in really big letters at the end). Thanks for all the wonderful comments! This next chapter(s) I need to completely rewrite, so it might not be up immediately.

I absolutely love this. It's my favorite story so far. :)

:O
Update soon please...very much addicted to this story :D

no no no no...it can't end
i just got hooked to this story!!!!!
stupid nate
he can go to hell

That was a complete twist in the story!!! I love it! But, please pretty please don't end it there.... that sounds like a really nice spot to end it, but I would love it if you continued... idk what I am going to read after this story ends. Sweet update!
~Mantis

:) I'm sorry about Yuffie productions ! That must suck, I bet you felt all official and stuff. I love this so much. And have I mentioned how nice the layout is?