Me when I saw this on my feed thing -"What in the living heck!"
Haha this story is like a wild blast from the past. I mean I read you on Quizilla and you and some select others are what made me come to Mibba! And this story is one I loved. So I'm excited to be reading it again all edited and stuff!!
okay, I found this through the comment swap, and I was surprised that I really liked this story. It was interesting. Your writing style is nice although you add unnecessary details sometimes. Poppy sounds so much fun as well. I can't wait to read more. :D
Let me just have a minute here to express myself before I try to form any more complete sentences; AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Wdfmerngieigasdncoawengutnbgfnvoawenrgnbnmdjnvfgfdbg.
Alright, now that I have my initial reaction out of the way I want to say that I am so completely, totally, super duper happy that you decided to re-write this story. I loved it the first time around and I'm sure I'll love it twice as much the second time. :)
I remember when I first read this before you revamped it, and I think I can see the changes :) Love the revision though. It's very well written and I love it :)
I'm loving the re-vamping (even though I loved the pre-vamping, too)! They're both so, well, so kinda likable, you know? In a twisty-twisted way, of course. So, yeah, keep up the great work.
Commenting so you update sooner! By the way--just a pinch of editing here-- in the very last line of the second paragraph you said, "At least I hope it will." It should probably be "At least I hoped it would." to keep the past tense and the imperfect tense parallel through the paragraph. *sorry, grammar freak here... I should be doing homework right now :l Ahhh!!! I can't wait to find out what happened where you left off; this was one of my favorites!