In Fate's Hands - Comments

aw crap. why do they always have to come and mess everything up?! they need to get a life, seriously.
update soon! (:

Jinna:
OH THE DRAMA!!!
This was both INCREDIBLY GREAT, and...Well...The twins have no right to try to tell Riley OR Ethan off.
They're just obnoxious stupid heads who ARE WITH EACH OTHER.
Even if they are hot.
THEY SHOULD GO AWAY.
I loved Rileys disgust of...girly-parts...It reminded me of Jones. <3

Jones:
I DO NOT TALK LIKE THAT.
I just...find "girly parts" more than slightly repulsive.
XD
Loved this.
Way to stand up for your man, Ethan!
You punch Keegan!
...Even if I am a pacifist, this was still great.
POOR IAN, THOUGH!
That cake must have taken AGES, and Keegan was such a dick to do that!
>.<

Mars:
Yay! Update!
Jones and Jinna tell me that the second you finish an update, they start hounding you for another.
I feel sorry for you.
Don't worry, I think Ethan's the shit.
If Jones had a brother, I'd DEFINITLEY punch him for doing something like that. xD
I think you should update soon! :]

Jinna [Jones agrees, but Jinna's typing this]:
DON'T LISTEN TO MARS.
We don't "think" you should update soon...
We DEMAND that you update soon!!!!
O.O

“Because, it’s a girl. They have…” I motioned to where the boobs are supposed to be. “…and a…” I directed my hand to my crotch area. “Just…ew.”
haha thats line made me burst out laughing

The twins though they suck =[
ruining his birthday they had no right *humph*

Fucking twins, ruing Riley's perfect birthday party! *grumble* *grumble* I'm glad Ethan bitched them out though. Now he just has to beat the shit out of them!

I love this story!
More soon?♥

Uuugh those bitches.

fucking amazing my dear <3333
write more! (:

Gahhh, that was so adorable!!! ^.^
:) You're such a good writer. :D

oh my sweet baby jesus, that was the sweetes thing ever!!!!!!!
gah, i loved it so much! more bootay kickage!!!
sad that its ending soon though, but i cant wait for ian and nick's story!!
: D

awh. and awkward about riley's parents seeing. haha.

I wasn't expecting that.
I almost cried xDD

awww!! that was so cute!!!
it made me tear up a little bit. xD
gahh, i loved it. :)

anywho, what I really wanted to say that I contemplated commenting this story
I mean, I know I would comment, I mean.. I ALWAYS DO! But knowing there are only so many chapters left, it gets to you! /;

THOUGHH, the Ian and Nick story is going to be legit :] So it makes up for it SOMEWHAT... but it might never be this awesome. THOUGH YOUR WRITING IS OZEEMO, SO IDK EITHER!

8D
this was a really cute update. My eyes watered when i read what Ethan gave Riley. Seriously the cutest thing anyone could EVER ask for...
He's very fortunate to have a guy like him. I wonder what the twins are doing? O_O
lmfao :]

Hmm, I see what you mean about her/his comments^^^ they're like uber amazing and like 10x better than mine;] ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

ANYWHORES~
I'm going to go see a band called Eyes Set to Kill on tuesday, so i get to skip school :D woo~
so anyways, i want to hold brandon's hand, and I was like MAYBE SHE WILL KNOW~
i was wondering if you think we should? At warped we help hands like four times during the show<3♥ and i got his auto graphh :''''''] so i was like BBY, HERE I COME BACK FOR YOU~
but now I'm like should I? idk...

THIS STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
is great
;]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
I.
WANT.
THAT.
This is Jones, BTDubbs.
Jinna went on 'a moonlit walk with Chance'...
Romantic saps.
So me and Mars are watching a movie.
A scary movie.
I HATE scary movies...but he pouted.
>.<
I hate boys.
Kidding.
Boys are like...sex machines.
Who doesn't LOVE sex machines?!?!
Either way, this is a great opportunity for me to 'hide my face in his chest in a fit of sudden fear' and then stay like that 'in case something scary happens again'
I'm a GENIUS.
Oh.
Wait.
I'm supposed to be writing about this chapter. xD I got off track. :]
...So...As I was saying...
I WANT THAT BOY. -points to Ethan-
That was ADORABLE.
Riley is SO LUCKY.
I wanted to cry when I saw that there'll be only 4 chapters left...
But Nick and Ian are sexy too...so YAY. <3
UPDATE SOON.
IMA WAITIN.
Oooooh. Scary part coming up. I gotta go.
Bye sweetie! :)

awwww this was so effin cute!!!!! (:
and I'm glad you're doing the Ian and Nick story.
update soon =D

Ohman, I would be seriously lying if I said I didn't have tears in my eyes while reading this.
It was honestly too cute, and just gah, sweeet. :)
Wow. I can't even tell you how great of a chapter this is. How greta of a story this is/
Ah, you're amazing. Really.
<3.

That was just so sweet!
It almost made me cry! ^.^
Great job!
Can't wait to read Nick and Ian's story.

Aaaawww! Im excited to read the Ian and Nick slash!

Aww the last chapter was so SWEET
I almost cried :)

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