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  • Never Coming Back

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    Poor Sloane. Poor Teak. Well, not REALLY poor Teak completely, but his reasoning behind it isn't completely his fault. I am going to miss this story when it's gone. I truly truly will. It's the only reason I come to this website anymore.
    June 20th, 2010 at 08:32am
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    Oh the pants off Gordon Bennett and all things artistic!
    THEY DID THE DEED! :O Heehee. I, too, am also glad you didn't get graphic. I always squirm when the characters only 'kiss' anyway. But you're ace, and you make it... enjoyable? Okay...
    WHAT HAPPENED TO SLOANE?!
    I have a feeling this has to do with Teak, since she text him on her phone And this Mandy character gets on my nerves. I like her dad and the girlfriend, they're an odd couple! That was random of the Doc to come too...

    Great updates, imagine how happy I was to see you already had two chapters up! ;)
    Excited for the next two, and the sequel!
    June 20th, 2010 at 04:09am
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    :o What happened with Sloane? I love that we meet the dad and the girlfriend. It was all so fast. And the doctor's random visit, but it all tied together. Sort of like her bubble was about to burst, which you could see happening at the end of this chapter. I'm glad you fixed whatever whoever reported. I don't ever want your story removed.
    June 19th, 2010 at 02:11pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    AHH!
    what happened!
    Update soon please!!!
    June 19th, 2010 at 10:05am
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    i told her not to do it i said shes gonna regret it
    but characters never listen to me at least she isnt preggo
    9sorry sarah) and she regrets it cuz bad boys are always
    bad news *that goes in an ominous voice*
    the sequell better be long (please :D)
    June 19th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • Never Coming Back

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    I'm pretty glad you didn't get graphic. And the fact you don't know how to write a sex scene relieves me. I'm 19 and I still don't. Hahaha, and proud of it. But I did enjoy this chapter.
    June 19th, 2010 at 03:20am
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    awww sloan is gonna regret it
    June 18th, 2010 at 04:27pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    AMAZING UPDATE!
    AHH! they did IT!
    woo hoo
    update soon
    June 18th, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
    MORW MORW MORE!!
    June 14th, 2010 at 01:05pm
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    Awesome chapter, as usual!
    I like how you did that 'Sarah train of thought' thing, I thought that was quite clever. And that Jaiden guy seems cute, it'd be cool for Kay and him to get together! Hehe. I loved the last line too, it made me smile.
    Can't wait for the next update. ;]
    June 14th, 2010 at 09:36am
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    Great update. :D Loved it as usual.
    June 14th, 2010 at 05:38am
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    Oh, and before I forget and it's too late; beautiful layout.
    The picture's pretty, and I'm jealous of that side bar thingy!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 10:19am
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    Hehe, after reading your author's note I'm feeling slighty guilty.
    I'm feeling as if I've kind of forced you somehow to write some Teak-Sloane action, but I won't worry wart myself over that. ;P
    Fan-fucking-tastic (and in a good way) chapter. It was cute, and nearing to the end I'm starting to want to have Teak for myself.
    I guess Sloane and I could share him? Eh, probably not... I think I'd be too intimidated of her.

    Update soon! Mmkay? Before I die of the suspension!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 10:13am
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    AWW! Cute!
    Sloane stuttered, hehe!
    update soon!
    June 1st, 2010 at 12:50pm
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    ^^ Oh yes! Some Sloane-Teak action pretty please?!

    Awesome chapter as always, so sorry I'm late to comment!
    Interesting chapter, I like how you skipped a month or two, and how everything's being introduced.
    And I'm terribly excited about this boyfriend business!
    May 29th, 2010 at 10:25am
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    Awesome!
    Would love some more sloane-teak action though!
    update soon!
    May 27th, 2010 at 08:07am
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    I love this chapter. She finally calls him boyfriend. Ahaha.
    May 27th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • No Hablos Ingles!

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    I've only read up to chapter ten so far, but I had to comment you on the brilliance of this story. I think it's so good! I love Sloane.(: I am going to subscribe, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters!
    You are an awesome writer!
    May 16th, 2010 at 04:23pm
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    Okay, I know I'm taking up a whole comment, but I'd love to thank everyone for commenting on this story. You guys really motivate me to get off my lazy arse and pour my imagination out onto paper (well, a computer actually). But thanks, I hope you read this too. :P
    May 5th, 2010 at 09:04am
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    Nice to see you again, ;)
    I remember seeing this on QZ but then you took it down, and then I found your mibba account on one of the author note thingy-ma-jigs, and just made another account since I can't remember my old one. It seems a lot of people are moving here.
    I've only read a few chapters yet, but I'm already in love with Sloane and Teak!
    May 5th, 2010 at 08:54am