March 23rd, 2010 at 09:25am
Finding Sloane Winters Crazy - Comments
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Please post another chapter!!March 23rd, 2010 at 06:41am
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AMAZING STORY!!!!!
update soon!!!!March 21st, 2010 at 03:17am -
I love that she's admitting things to the shrink. It's a great way to explain the feelings she had after the kiss.March 20th, 2010 at 05:04pm
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Reading this story is like being on an emotional rollercoaster. You are a master at displaying feelings forcefully but with a calm flow that creates masses of susceptible emotions, at least when placed in terms of confusion and blurred emotions. Like running red and blue together but only getting a swirl without definite lines instead of a different colour.
Only you have so many colours that its bizarre that I'm keeping up. The paint brush is swirling and I still get it.
XpeaceXMarch 20th, 2010 at 08:53am -
Love the kiss. I loved the blog about the kiss as well.March 14th, 2010 at 08:18pm
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I loved the last chapter in Teak's POV. It was really good and descriptive and definitely one of my favorites now. Can't wait for the next one.March 13th, 2010 at 04:55am
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I didn't expect Bess to be so judgemental. I mean, I did, because you forewarned us a bit, but I hope their friendships aren't all torn apart. I love your writing.March 12th, 2010 at 05:27am
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I love this story
you've managed to make mutilple character points of veiw chapter work really well and i love this amount of descrpition.
I read all of your story just after watching the Effy and Freddie epsoide of skins and Sloane's character is similar to Effy's so sorry i am ignoring the charater photo you picked and using Effy instead :)March 8th, 2010 at 06:46pm -
I love reading from Kay. She notices everything. All your characters see different things. I love your style. :]February 22nd, 2010 at 12:58pm
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I love Sarah Barielles for one, and I loved this chapter, of course. I am so excited to see Sloane mustering up kind words for a friend, when she saw it coming. And giving up an oppurtunity to speak with Teak...she is commendable.February 17th, 2010 at 07:49pm
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I enjoy hearing from her father. He's quite funny. And I enjoy those emails from the school, simply because they add to the foreshadowing. There is going to be a sports event. :oFebruary 15th, 2010 at 09:37pm
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Happy St. Valentine's Day!! =) I went to church(haha =P I drank lots of coffee so I could keep myself from nodding off) and got lost with my sister on our way to a used book fair where I bought over fifty dollars worth of books for nine dollars and fifty cents! =O And while we were lost I bought a bouquet from a stand in the parking lot. Yellow roses with baby's breath, true friendship and eternal love. <3
I'm kinda scared for Sarah, I have a feeling this dude is someone she will really regret sleeping with.(plus I doubt he used a condom.)
I like that Sloane has a leather jacket =]February 15th, 2010 at 01:30am -
Sloane is a good friend. Like I've said before, she's so perceptive, and that is what I love most about this. And I love how all of the characters see things differently.February 14th, 2010 at 08:16pm
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You're right! I love Teak =) even when Sloane hated him haha. I agree with the rest of the comments! Your characters are real, and it's really refreshing =)
I feel so spoiled! hehe you updated twice today! Thank you so much!February 13th, 2010 at 08:22am -
Gorgeously written. I finally get to see through Teak's eyes. It's nice how this chapter is laid out. I enjoy hearing from Sloane the most. I'm glad you wrote another chapter. :]February 13th, 2010 at 04:46am
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I love Sloane as a character, as a person, and as a writer. Her blogs are flawless. Perfect grammar usage. So refreshing. I'm glad I can hate Teak with her for a moment. I love stories I can get into. Yours is definately one of them. It seems like a book, already.February 12th, 2010 at 08:25pm
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Ahh ha ha. I love Xavier boys. Some of them are really cute. sorry, all girls school student takling here. I haven't read much but i relly like your story so far. keep up the good work. xoxoFebruary 12th, 2010 at 08:06am
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What can I say? I love your story too much NOT to comment it. I love how Bess redirects the subject matter from Teak to Riley without realizing that she's being selfish. So realistically like my friends, and myself for that matter. Getting caught up in our own worlds.
Thank you for another amazing, skillfully written chapter.February 12th, 2010 at 05:47am -
Wow this is so good! I'm hooked. You're writing style is really different from anything I've read before, it's really interesting to read the story this way =)
Update soon!February 11th, 2010 at 09:14am
update soon!!
need sloane POV!!!
great story :)