Hells Angel - Comments

Love the story!!! Are you still updating?

Ok, I have to be honest: I'm a little disappointed that there wasn't anything regarding the whole Hell's Angels topic. I was considering the notion that maybe they were gonna come down and they were the new vamps tormenting the reservation - that woulda been awesome.

In any case, I enjoyed the fact that you put your own creative twist on it - yes, creative freedom is indeed a beautiful thing - and it's fun to take something you enjoy and bend it into something you've created, where you can enjoy it even more. I dig that. I mean it's one of the things that makes fanfiction so great in the first place, right?

One question, though. What exactly happened to Nessie? If you're anything like me, then even if you didn't write about it here for us to see, you still have it all worked out in your mind. So...what's up, lol? :-D

its amazing

Awwww..... chapter 20 is AMAZING, Trisha! i absolutley loooooved it! i like how Jack gets his last little bit in the story, cuz he wasnt in there a whole lot.... haha i loooooved the story, i see what you mean by the story probably wouldve sucked after chapter 20, no offense! =]

I AM rather amazing, aren't I? HAHA!
Now I'm sad--it's over! Put the next story up SOOOOOOOOOOOON!! And when you do, message/comment me, because I SO want to be the first to read it and tell you how amazing it is! Kay? Good.

Love Always,
~Kami

Awe.
It's over.
We will miss you.
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<3

Oh my gooood, I swear to you, I'm crying right now because this is over =[ I love this story sooooo much, and I think you ended it perfectly. This will be one of those stories that I go back and read over and over because it's soooooo friggin awesome. Great job doll, can't wait to see what you do next =]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe, I don't want it to be over! :( it was definitely special, in a good way may I add! and I didn't find it predicable at all. I thought the drama was going to be the Hells Angels, I mean you never know if there's a vampire in the club, who's mad because they moved before he could eat Avery...or turn her. (if this gives you an idea for a sequel then take it! I WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS STORY!! T-T)

Awww. I'm such a sucker for happy endings.
I absolutely loved that.
XD her dad's reaction was my favorite.
I can just picture him holding Jake up against the wall like that.
Fabulous job with this story, I loved it!
Can't wait for your next. :D

I loved this ending! I do prefer the nice happily ever after to the not so happily ever after. Great job though I loved the story!

this story was great!!!!!!!!! im gonna check out your other ones.

Two things--

Chappie was amazing, as always.

ANd the pic for the layout is being gay-tarded and I can no longer behold Jacob's shirtless glory!

=3

If chapter twently doesn't suck then I'm going to be terribly depressed when the story's over.

Love Always,
~Kami

BELLA GO PWNED! BELLA GOT PWNED! wondr wat edwards gonna do bout her..

why are you only doing 20 chapters???? this story is waaay too good for it to be only 20 chapters! by the way, chapter 19 was really good!

I loved the update, Bella is crazy xD odd question though, was that chapter inspired by Vampires Will Never Hurt You - My Chemical Romance? or was it just a coincidence that it reminded me of the song? lol :P

I'll miss this story, but I'm excited for your new one. :D
AAAAAAAAAAAAAah.
Bella I think should die for being so stupid and so revengeful. Really? She paid someone to make her look innocent? What scum.
Edward should dump her ass.
Just saying.
XD

We will miss your story.
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<3

I know, isn't it insane seeing so many readers for YOUR creation? I have the same feeling whenever I look at my Harry Potter fanfic. 100+ readers and a million subscribers! It's so insane, isn't it?

Anywho, loved the updates! But, i'm sad. Only two more chapters. D=
Oh well, all good things must come to an end, right?

Love Always,
~Kami

OH MY GOD!
I was finally able to catch up on the two updates I missed.
I think they deserve another OH MY GOD!
Bella's been the bad guy all along?! She sounded like she was having a fit or something in that last chapter, but she could have been faking it....
I still can't believe it was her!
Ahhhh!
Absolutely fabulous updates. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

♥♥♥I love this story♥♥♥
I hope Bella get her ass kicked!