Perfect, just perfect. The flow of this chapter was amazing, as all of them have been. I can't wait for your next update, and sorry it took 3 days for me to comment this update. The only thing that made me sad was what frank said to his mom, " it will end in cancer" i think were the words, all i can sasy to that is PLEEEEEEASE NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well it looks as if frank has come to terms with the cancer in a healthy way...unlike before when he just wanted to give up. I can only hope his conversation with his mother isn't a foreshadow of what is to come..I feel that our couple should be able to live happy lives together for a long time once frank gets better.
Aw, I really liked that update. I kinda felt for Linda when Frank told her that he was ready if the cancer took him. What a thing to say to your mom, "Hey mom, just wanted to let you know that I'm probably going to die but that's okie-dokie with me!" Yeah, perfect.
:) this made me really happy...it'll probably make my weekend better <3 they are so cute as a couple..i just hope all this can last because we all know that frank isn't out of the woods yet
Okay. So, I just got caught up on reading the whole of this story (so far). And I just wanted to let you know that I really love your writing. The way you've created each character is amazing; and each new scene and chapter is captivating as all hell. Your writing style (which I greatly admire) combined with a plot that actually causes me to think, (perhaps about love, or life, or death, or family?) really makes a beautiful piece of work.
That being said, this story makes me fucking cry. Hard. This, as it turns out, is probably just another testament to your writing. It really takes a legitimate illustration to bring up that kind of emotion. So anyway, as much as I feel the need to be angry with you for getting me addicted to this masochistic story reading, I really appreciate being able to read something this well written and beautiful. But either way, this story has me captivated, and I am certainly, if not somewhat wearily, looking forward to more. (I’m just going to keep tissues next to my computer from now on; worth it, I think.)
wow i never expected frank to stop taking the medication...that was a twist.
this part was heart wrenching: The hardest part of it all had been watching Frank place the white rose Gerard had given him on top of the small coffin, and hear him say, “I hope you find Heaven and that it’s as beautiful as we thought it would be.”
well...the ending was somewhat happy...gerard and frankie said i love you to each other in what seems like the first time in a while....for gerard at least.
i want more fluff please!!!!