Just Your Average Pool Boy - Comments

yum yum, mannn that was sexual!

Haha.(Sorry I just felt like giggling.) Yay! They finally(in a way) let their true feelings show!! = D Update soon!!! I'd probaly check behind me once in a while if I were writing a chapter like that too. = )

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

I must have no heart/soul because I never ONCE smiled during that T_T
never.. once.

♥

KIDDING! Hahah, that'd be SO weird. I was laughing/smiling my ass off as I read this ^.^

You totally made it up to ME. :D Was greeaattttt♥<3

Lol, Gerard couldn't take it?

okay how sexy was that?
not been reading something as sexy like that for some time now :O SEXY! :D
More pleaseee :D

hee hee cinematic adventures is so Dane Cook lol
YAYY!!! om nom nom that was one h*ll of a chapter.
Go Gerard! lol
I STILL adore this story!!!

oohh... yummm... haha, that was quite the amazingness chapter :D
and I'm always looking over my shoulder too to see if my parents are looking while I'm writing scenes like this. ehe...
I can't wait for more!

OHOHOHOHOHO RAWRRAWR *suggestive eyebrow waggle* that was "friendly" lol/ yea....it would eb awkward if your grandma were to read this (but i dont mind) nono, jk, im not a creeper (kinda) i kept looking behind me too. it was that intense man...INTENSE!

Ha I do the same thing when I write scenes like you did in chapter 5 I always look to see if one of my parent are looking lol. I really loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next update

I am really enjoying this so far!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay, congrats! ^.^

Aww, it wasn't bad and boring. I liked it. ^.^

can your bro work more ofthen :P hahaha Awesome update and i LOVE DONNER!!! how awesome is she lol she sound like my mom and it would be something she would do as well!

more please XD xxx

p.s i love this story XD

Haha! Donna's so funny!! = D Is your brother at work often?? = D Hehe, Update soon!! = D

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

P.S. I love your story!!! = D

LOL i can't wait to see how awkward gerard will be around frank at the sleepover
lol

Motherfucking yay. :D

This was not disappointing, it was GOOD!!!! dialogue is fun when frank and gee are there :)

It was perrttyyyyyyyyy funny ;) I really like Donna, she's so filled with excitement and she acts like a complete teenager. I love that! :D

This was great, don't be disappointed!!!! ♥

haha, I love Donna! She's so funny..
I'm super excited for the next chapter :D

Oh wow...
I love Donna so much in this story, lol. She is like, the coolest mom ever.
I wonder what will happen at the sleepover...
I'll be thinking about that until you update again =)
<3

I have been CRAVING this story!! I love it.
I am highly anticipating the next chapter!