Just Your Average Pool Boy - Comments

DONNA'S awesome nuff said...so happy u updated again

haha I love this!
Donna's so funny

Very amusing! I can't wait to see what happens with the boys, and where you take this! =D

i love this so far!! i like donna, she's awesome!!! XD
can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!

XD This is coolio.
Soo, Frank cleans pools? I have no idea what a pool boy is, So I'm guessing here.
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If your mission in life is to smother me with happiness, you may die peacefully. (I hope that makes sense in a totally non-creepy way...)

Oh that was great. Donna is awesome. LOL!

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First of all, I'd like to thank you for that ^_^
Hmm... I like Donna as the evil mother, but with good intentions... yes, very good intentions. I think it's funny how she put Gerard up to it, so surely she won't have a cow if they did (and hopefully will) end up dating.
I can totally picture Frank being a huge flirt for some reason, and Gerard being all awkward, so I can definitely picture this.
Loved the update.
Keep up the great work!

haha a frerard with frankie in a swimsuit...
yeah, doesn't get much better than that. it's going to be funny to see him and gerard flirt and donna's evil plans :)

heehee... I already love this! It's quite amazing :D
update soon please?

No joke, butterflies in my tummy the entire time I read this! That shows you have some real talent for sexual tension, cause it takes a lot for me to do that. This really is fabulous!!! Update soon...*puppy dog eyes* <3

Haha. I already really really like it!! The ending of the 1st chapter was funny. = D Update soon!!! = D

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

fucking loved it!

and im am going to have fun reading more please :D hehehe xxx

ahhh im addicted already, more pwees? <3

I all ready love it!!

Hahahaha, I love the plot of this.
Its written really well. =]
I (also) love how you didn't make it extremely cliche'
Update soon?

Okay... so...
I really liked it!
I'm glad that you didn't make the first chapter with Gerard being a miserable art student at a college with a history of depression and then Frank who's only working to help his mom and possibly younger sibling get by. That really attracted me to the story ^_^
I'm also happy that you went with natural plot instead of it being all sex, drugs, and cheating. I've only read a few of those that are written well, but it's becoming quite cliche, I'm afraid to say =(
Anyway, I will definitely be subscribing to this story. I think it's funny how Gerard's mom acted around him, and I'm glad to know that he's already out of the closet and everything.
I don't think that I can say it enough, but I like that it's light and feathery and not droopy and evil-feeling. I like reading happy Frerard's =D
Keep up the good work!